AsuraMonarch

Checking out the author's profile scares me with their history, but aside from that. This story is quite good an interesting premise and the AN's give me hope this won't just be cn-inspired slop.

Brother in christ a "suppressor" is not like the movies where it makes pew pew sounds, it only reduces decibels by like 20-30.

Esdeath's feats are insane, fucking time stop?

Hello? Sharingan?

Let's start with the obvious, the Fisk scenario while interesting the way it got to that point is not the best. Aside from that? Its quite good. Some scenes feel a little overdramatic, like don't get me wrong I liked the Anodite scene but it was a bit much. Aside from that the continued plot derailment is fascinating, I assume TVA is a non issue then. Also the characters the MC interact with, the Fisk scenes can be a bit of a coin flip. But I love his interactions with Emma and Hulk/Banner. It really does feel like it gets better the longer it goes on, hope you stick with this because you got something good going here.

Typical Chinese MC fanfic. speaks one thing, wants one thing, but switches up so fucking fast. The only good thing is that the life simulation system is given proper respect and chances are rare. But I cannot stand such a chinese MC. But if you want a time waster? welp still not it. wait for like a year to have enough stock to waste time. Assuming you can stand the brain damage. In terms of the translation it's yet another typical fair. Grammar issues are abound but not too glaring on the eyes.

Oh there'll be backshots...

well what do I even say?the pace is horrendous filled with time skips.the opening and introduction to the why the mc is in nano machine and not derailing the plot is flimsy at best, downright stupid at worst.the characters? one dimensional as all hell, oh look mc is evil, ruthless, can restart civilization from the stone ages cause apparently he fucking knows how to make shit, and he is a shitty version of hisoka.I'd write more but on phone this is quite the chore. the only redeeming factor is the fact that it's set in nano machine and even then the author isn't using the solid source material enough, or it could just be the low chapter and wordcount for now.overall for web novel quality? not the worst once it has more content, an option as a time waster.

I'm late to the crusade, so I'm just going to reiterate what has already been said. Drawing inspiration from certain scenes and whatnot from another fanfic/story? cool, basically being a word for word if not worse copy? that's yikes.