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InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv66yr
2018-11-02 16:35

Ranghess is being fucking shameless spamming 5 stars for over and over. This story is trash with a capital T. It’s utter garbage okay? The story is all over the place with **** tons of flaws in the plot and the time skip happens really often as well. If you are reading this, rate a 1 Star and leave because the 5 stars on the rating is a sham

A Warrior's Path

DreAm_b0At
4.0
288 Chs

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NoobLord114
NoobLord114Lv6

It is a great fan fic btw

6yr
linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Are you jealous or something?

5yr
LizodIDK
LizodIDKLv12

Well, a lot of people would be jealous of a person who writes trash but is somehow on top rankings.

linchufeng:Are you jealous or something?
5yr
10
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

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LizodIDK:Well, a lot of people would be jealous of a person who writes trash but is somehow on top rankings.
5yr
2
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HungryForChapters
HungryForChaptersLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr

chrissichris19
chrissichris19Lv14

The story started with one of the best premise ever but then the MC became one of the most hypocritical person ever and the dumbest MC you can see (all while being reincarnated with 360 intelligence and 325 wisdom) which doesn't make any sense. That's not the worst. The main problem is that the author doesn't interact with the readers. He'll see the questions and reviews but just answer the ones who benefit him or say "you'll see later" and expect us to just forget about the problem in the story. Even if you're gonna tell us to scram because it's your story and you do what you want at least say it so we can leave instead of making us expect a change which isn't going to happen.

6yr
Hahadavis
HahadavisLv5

Heto complex mc πŸ˜‘, spending all his points on people he doesn't know but not his parents and you call him a genius πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

6yr
Cabul
CabulLv4

This garbage is included in the popular list?! What's with this world? Are you guys dumb or what? This is really ridiculous! Even 2 stars aren't worth it! BLEH! Garbage... Yes! This is suitable to describe this sh*t! The quality of your writing is bad enough to kill me if I keep reading it. Wasting karma points for strangers, you haven't even been born but you just give them many things! And are you even sure you will born in Konoha? And what did you give to your parents? NOTHING! You're not a good person, just an idiot. *WARNING Don't waste your time here

6yr
Atalkingrock
AtalkingrockLv14

I'm I'm complete agreement for in hungry for chapters, except he doesnt mention how messy the writing looks. Its not grammar but your eyes will slowly die while reading it.

6yr
Hypnosxs
HypnosxsLv13

Is the Gay MC tag joke? i didnt finish reading yet he already getting the second wife >.< i feel cheated >.< ____________________________________________________________________________________

5yr
Petrifly
PetriflyLv10

Pretty disappointed with how the novel turned out especially so early on in the novel. Most of the problems i had is already addressed by the top negative reviewer. TLDR - Dumb af MC - MC personality doesn't match after reincarnating (feels like a whole new character) - Plotholes

6yr
LandUpGaming
LandUpGamingLv12

Spent 15 days in the womb, goes unconscious for 8 months and 15 days (at this point he should only have a day at most before it hits 9 months) still has to spend 50 more days in the womb. So according to the author it takes around 10 3/4ish months to be born, can't even get something so ****** right.

6yr
Ruler_Of_Heaven
Ruler_Of_HeavenLv4

Wtf with this fan-fic spammed his own novel 5 star review with alt account have some shame bro! This is the most shameless author that I ever seen!

6yr
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