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Katrina_Bea123Lv114yr
2021-02-21 04:30

In my opinion, the story was written badly. Why? It’s because the story was written so deliberately and detailed that it took the fun of using common sense to understand the story out. Also every time there was a bad person in the story, expect these types of line, “She is a very selfish person. She doesn’t care about anyone. She only blames anyone but herself.” This turns me off so much, which is one of the reasons I decided to drop the book. Lines like, “She said it calmly, like it wasn’t a big deal.” also somehow made me feel as if the FL was narcissistic. Also, I don’t know what your type is but the fantasy element in the story is getting too much for me. It doesn’t seem to go well with the story. I don’t have anything against mondern theme with fantasy. But the way this was written into the story didn’t justify the fantasy elements. All in all, I don’t feel that this is a very good book, but if you have nothing to read, might as well try this one.

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Katrina_Bea123Lv11

Btw, the translation and updates are good, which is why both have five stars. They are the only criteria that made the whole review of mine even reach 2.6 stars.

Katrina_Bea123Lv11

Okay, this is my last comment. But, Gu Ning’s country has something against the R country, I think they have deep-seated hatred. In the first part of the story, when Gu Ning was selling a jade, a man from country R wanted to buy it and even had a translator, but Gu Ning decided to be bitchy and refuse him simply because he was from country R. Now, if her country had the law to not sell people from country R items, then I won’t have a problem with it. The man wasn’t even rude or anything. This is just plain discrimination. She may be very patriotic but to me, this is a Grade A discrimination. Now there are actually people in the story from country R who are legit villains, and deserved to be punished but the man who just wanted jade didn’t even show a bit of rudeness. For a FL who claim to be nice to who’s nice to her and rude to who’s rude to her, clearly, she just has a prejudice against people from a certain country. From where I’m from, the Spaniards colonized us for 300 years, but you don’t see us hating the Spaniards for all the shit they put us through, right? We praise one of our heroes for writing novels that put all the evil deeds the Spaniards did to our countrymen, but we don’t hate the Spaniards, nor do we discriminate against them. But hey, I guess Gu Ning’s one of a kind and a fictional character, so I guess this is not to be compared. But then again, people can sell to whom they want to sell. I mean, there are actually laws about who and what to sell, but it seems this story doesn’t.

Niddhi_SahuLv2

l think she is good to the people who are rich and is ready to help them and even if saved anyone without knowing their family status will turn up to be rich.

Katrina_Bea123:Okay, this is my last comment. But, Gu Ning’s country has something against the R country, I think they have deep-seated hatred. In the first part of the story, when Gu Ning was selling a jade, a man from country R wanted to buy it and even had a translator, but Gu Ning decided to be bitchy and refuse him simply because he was from country R. Now, if her country had the law to not sell people from country R items, then I won’t have a problem with it. The man wasn’t even rude or anything. This is just plain discrimination. She may be very patriotic but to me, this is a Grade A discrimination. Now there are actually people in the story from country R who are legit villains, and deserved to be punished but the man who just wanted jade didn’t even show a bit of rudeness. For a FL who claim to be nice to who’s nice to her and rude to who’s rude to her, clearly, she just has a prejudice against people from a certain country. From where I’m from, the Spaniards colonized us for 300 years, but you don’t see us hating the Spaniards for all the shit they put us through, right? We praise one of our heroes for writing novels that put all the evil deeds the Spaniards did to our countrymen, but we don’t hate the Spaniards, nor do we discriminate against them. But hey, I guess Gu Ning’s one of a kind and a fictional character, so I guess this is not to be compared. But then again, people can sell to whom they want to sell. I mean, there are actually laws about who and what to sell, but it seems this story doesn’t.
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