Translation is on the verge of unreadable. I’m pretty sure this is MTL with a half as.sed first editing job. Character development is extremely cliche’ expect every revenge character trope. World design is horrible. The whole plot seems plagiarized, so have fun reading this. The only good thing about this is that since it’s MTL quality goods, the chapter dump is massive.
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LIKESame. I don't even understand why the reviews are so positive, are these people even reading the story?
Invisible_Ecka:Glad I'm not the only one who can't read anymore. My head's hurting from reading it. It's been going round and round with the sentences. Like the chap's full of fillers to add on the word count
Eh I don’t really mind spelling unless it’s like HORRIBLE there are a few mistakes but I just correct them in my head and continue so yea I agree with you
DezXerneas:The story is great, if by great you mean generic power fantasy. I don't even mind the obvious plotholes, it's grammar just makes it unreadable.
Honestly, this is not the worst translated one on here that I've read so far. There are some that are so bad it literally pains my brain to read it. I enjoy the OP FL though, especially all the jade stuff she does. I enjoy the destruction of her enemies too. As a recommendation, you might enjoy the webcomic for this instead of the novel. You can see the side characters acting much more in that.
Try Rebirth of the Best Businesswoman at School. It may be plagiarized from this and a few of your usual Jade and revenge tropes. I like the one I recommended better. It has fleshed out side characters, less chapters, and for the most part, other than the pronouns, the translation isn't too bad.