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2019-12-27 12:35

I've read almost 200 chapters but it seems to have the same situation happening. Everything happens so coincidental that there's no conflict for the FL and ML. This FL is way too overpowered (with her cheat, she KNOWS everything and can DO anything) and it seems like everything is just handed to her. The characters around her are also pretty bland that you'd see passages where they'd be grouped together saying "me too". That's no problem for mob characters, but for her friends/side characters who are supposed to be present throughout the story to not have any individuality is pretty annoying, especially since they are all just "yes men" to the FL. Sure there are people who go against her but they are never that threatening. I think that's what this novel is missing. The faceslapping would feel much more rewarding if there was some stakes in it. Which is why I'll be dropping this novel. If it changes, please do tell at which chapter and I'll give it another chance. 🙂

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Try Rebirth of the Best Businesswoman at School. I like it much better. The characters are more fleshed out. The mc isn't op. She has the potential to be, but has to work hard to get there. At 2/3rds of the way through, there are still people more powerful. She wasn't some super agent in her last life. She was herself, which was an actual businesswoman. Give it a try, and see if you like it.

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