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2020-10-01 07:18

The moment slivia died was the moment my note of this novel got to 0 it was too forced and clearly you didn’t know what to do with Her and let her die to force a Charcater development on a fucking useless mc anyway just the beginning made me puKe

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TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

thanks for the honest thoughts. sorry you didn't like it

0Akai0_3164
0Akai0_3164Lv3

by the way 200 chapter but the mc still blush for every reason and each wive is more annoying than the other and what chapter will he finnaly get a fucking bit of bravery ?

TheSilverQuill:thanks for the honest thoughts. sorry you didn't like it
TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

Jack gives up the V-card in chapter 247

0Akai0_3164:by the way 200 chapter but the mc still blush for every reason and each wive is more annoying than the other and what chapter will he finnaly get a fucking bit of bravery ?
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

So mc harem member dies?

0Akai0_3164
0Akai0_3164Lv3

yes

Lord_Eternity:So mc harem member dies?
Dotakiin
DotakiinLv13

more than 1

Lord_Eternity:So mc harem member dies?
Lord_Eternity
Lord_EternityLv4

Thats why I dropped the trash. Author should seriously put such tags

Dotakiin:more than 1
deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1

try reading Nine Ender, you won't be disappointed

Lord_Eternity:Thats why I dropped the trash. Author should seriously put such tags
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