The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.
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LIKEFuck, there's an error in the first sentence.
Thanks for the praise, I'm very excited to write this for everyone. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Don't worry, my brain auto corrected. 😉
Is the MC a douche for the entire story? I mean if he it is fine. I just personally dont want to read about some arrogant self centered asshole "hero".
Fucking autocorrect
I wish I could afford something like that... Sadly, I can only write and try to overcome my human errors more and more over time.
He's not. That's the point. I wanted a dynamic MC that learns and grows to find his true self and not the projected image of what he thinks he can be. That becomes clear as the story develops. And sorry for the late reply... 😅
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