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ahdamnitLv45yr
2019-09-07 14:59

This story is so bad. The MC is a useless idiot who gets bullied by a guild leader in to joining after making an enemy of the king for a stupid reason and not working for him. I could not read many chapters before having to give up.

The Achievement Junkie

TheSilverQuill
4.1
739 Chs

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TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

Thank you for your honesty

5yr
1
Shadizar
ShadizarLv6

Except if you kept reading you'd know that things aren't as simplistic as you're depicting them.

5yr
6
Donald_Mungcal
Donald_MungcalLv3

Well, he easily give out every secret he knows. And being blackmailed by everyone(force marriage). For a schemer to be bullied easily because of his own mouth. Sheeesh!

4yr
18
De_Bo
De_BoLv10

I like the brashness of the mc challenging the summoner (king). I've always disliked the gullibility of summoned to fight for the king without question. It may lay in my innate character to challenge authority.

4yr
3
SmilingPerson
SmilingPersonLv3

"It may lay in my innate character to challenge authority."

De_Bo:I like the brashness of the mc challenging the summoner (king). I've always disliked the gullibility of summoned to fight for the king without question. It may lay in my innate character to challenge authority.
4yr
24
Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

lol when the king summon him, he himself don't know what his power or what capabilities he have and even the simple status he doesn't know. the king is patiently and politely explaining to him but he is so arrogant. what if the king wants to kill him? he has no power so dead like his brain

De_Bo:I like the brashness of the mc challenging the summoner (king). I've always disliked the gullibility of summoned to fight for the king without question. It may lay in my innate character to challenge authority.
4yr
5
Lobski
LobskiLv13

The point is that if you keep reading there's an explanation as to why he chooses to be brash to the king and it was also a test to see if the king was arrogant. Also, why does he have to follow the king just because he got summoned by him?

Kaisen1:lol when the king summon him, he himself don't know what his power or what capabilities he have and even the simple status he doesn't know. the king is patiently and politely explaining to him but he is so arrogant. what if the king wants to kill him? he has no power so dead like his brain
4yr
Fishball_22
Fishball_22Lv3

reason for why he has to follow him? Simply because the king can kill him anytime he wants. The king is a king. He's someone with a high status so he deserves to be arrogant but he didn't do so. Instead, he patientpatiently tried to talked it with the MC. But what did that idiot mc did in return? Baah!! You said he's testing the king? seriously? Being proud is one thing but to be arrogant despite knowing you are a weak ass shit....... For me that was a moronic thing to do. If that happens in real life, not to mention the king. The guards should have long lollies that punk for being impudent in front of a royalty. So stupid. And when I say stupid, moronic etc, I am only referring about the MC. Not the author or any of you here so don't get me wrong.

Lobski:The point is that if you keep reading there's an explanation as to why he chooses to be brash to the king and it was also a test to see if the king was arrogant. Also, why does he have to follow the king just because he got summoned by him?
4yr
12
Lobski
LobskiLv13

I also wouldn't take it that way. Also, the king is just as arrogant as Jack in this scenario, yes Jack started it but he wanted to see what the king was made of. If you head read a little more you would've also seen that the king himself didn't want Jack to join his faction for reasons. But in the end it doesn't even matter what I say, if you don't like the novel, then you don't. You're free to have your opinion so, go you, you have an opinion.

Fishball_22:reason for why he has to follow him? Simply because the king can kill him anytime he wants. The king is a king. He's someone with a high status so he deserves to be arrogant but he didn't do so. Instead, he patientpatiently tried to talked it with the MC. But what did that idiot mc did in return? Baah!! You said he's testing the king? seriously? Being proud is one thing but to be arrogant despite knowing you are a weak ass shit....... For me that was a moronic thing to do. If that happens in real life, not to mention the king. The guards should have long lollies that punk for being impudent in front of a royalty. So stupid. And when I say stupid, moronic etc, I am only referring about the MC. Not the author or any of you here so don't get me wrong.
4yr
a_commoner
a_commonerLv5

It lay in your innate character to seek death. A smart move is at least to pretend. It's not like you know nothing about kings.

De_Bo:I like the brashness of the mc challenging the summoner (king). I've always disliked the gullibility of summoned to fight for the king without question. It may lay in my innate character to challenge authority.
3yr
3
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Lobski
LobskiLv13

This novel is one of the best original novels on here, don't get throw of by jacks arrogance at the beginning since he has a good reason for it, if you haven't started reading it, do it now. The novel's at it's last arc so you won't have to wait for the story once you caught up since it'll be finished then. Enjoy.

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Andrew_Brandt
Andrew_BrandtLv14

Good read. Long but worth it. The characters are well written, with very little to no plot armor. Characters have flaws which is important, as flawless characters are boring. Can’t wait to read more of your work in the shared universe.

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TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

The SEQUEL is out now!! "Outclassing the Achievement Junkie"!!! Join the new adventure following one of Jack's latest schemes involving a fresh achievement junkie MC, including a prologue with Jack and Bowzer in a dungeon crawl. Check it out if you want a fresh take on the Achievement System, new worlds to explore, tons of gods to meet/fight, and more AJ vibes than ever! ;)

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Just_a_person
Just_a_personLv5

Bad mc attitude. Very arrogant King: “Can you really help us?” Tries to clarify if the legends are true and if he’s really worth it. Mc: “Wtf man, I just need all this stuff and I’ll solve your problems ok?” Doesn’t provide any info at all and leaves once the king showed hesitation.

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LostEra
LostEraLv15

Just read chapter 2 and it is like the author had decided to put the most dumb and stupid things an mc can do in an isekai novel into 1 person. First of all openly declaring that he is not going to an ally would usually mean voluntary giving up your life because they have spent a lot of resources to summon you and the first you do is say that you're not an ally, if this isn't dumb than I don't know what is smart. Than even before the king can finish speaking he interrupts the king and in a disrespectful way says who are you and why am I here? Any culture on earth that has kings, future or present, has lesse mayeste rules to define what happens when someone is disrespectful to the throne and this mc just acts like it is normal to be direct and disrespectful while what is normal is that he would have been beheaded for his behavior. If this novel is full of these kind of illogical inconsistencies than I will quit reading this novel very quickly

5yr
TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

After writing 600+ chapters, I'm writing a second and final review. By then, the characters and readers understand that Achievement Junkie is simply one world within a multiverse. Yes, I said MULTIVERSE. All stories that I write will be from different worlds in different parts of the audience-dubbed "Quillverse". Some characters and intergalactic knowledge may be hinted at or shared within the many stories, but each world and plot is completely different from the others. So, if you like an unpredictable, ever-growing world and universe where characters across various stories will meet and "cross-over" to work together and/or face each other, then you're in the right place. And no, you won't technically need to read them in order. You'll be able to read the final culminating story that connects everything without reading any other stories. But you'll be missing out on many hints or call backs, as well the satisfaction of seeing all the other worlds' characters grow and join the intergalactic battle. At the moment, there are 6 stories guaranteed slots in the Quillverse, with 5 leading up to the giant, final journey to connect everything. I may add more stories to the list leading up to the finale story, but I'm not promising anything apart from the 6 stories that I've already outlined and plotted at the time of writing this review. Thank you for considering my story, and I hope you find the entertainment you're looking for. Have a high-five. ヘ( ^o^)ノ＼(^_^ )

4yr
TheSilverQuill
TheSilverQuillAuthor

A fun adventure that reaches the hearts of both video game and fantasy lovers. Following the story of Jack and his growth feels real yet fantastic, giving a unique vibe and read. There's comedy and emotion laced in every part of the story so that you can better understand the characters and the events taking place.

5yr
Daoist_K
Daoist_KLv6

grammer is fine, but the story, its just another chuunibyou author writing his wet dreams without much thought of how social life really works

5yr
Grimmypoo
GrimmypooLv5

The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.

5yr
dan0206
dan0206Lv14

Great story with a nice writing style as well as good language use, enjoying every bit of it. Highly recommended. Chapter lengths are good and flows well. Wishing all the best to the author and keep up the good work

5yr
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