Item: Lord Shadow
Rating: 3
Author: DevaVeeran

DevaVeeranLv115yr

2019-12-28 13:47

The story is great but it is being ruined by lack of seriousness from the author, writing 2 novels simultaneously Reducing the quality & quantity of this novel.

Lord Shadow

Keikokumars

3.9

1913 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies2

KeikokumarsAuthor

Sorry you felt that way. Maybe I had to stop one book and you are wrong about one thing. The story is still progressing as the way I thought of

5yr

DevaVeeranLv11

All the best then.

Keikokumars:Sorry you felt that way. Maybe I had to stop one book and you are wrong about one thing. The story is still progressing as the way I thought of

5yr

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