I mean the story is very boring, there's so much transition from future and the past, like mann can you just calm the fck down, i mean like wtf its very confusing. Example the next chapter will be in the future instantly then will show you the future mc, like i mean if you're gonna show the future mc whats the point of building the character right wtf
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Sorry you felt that way. The future MC was in Loki timeline and not the current MC. The whole point of Loki time travel is to change the future that he saw. And in that future Azief was not as compassionate and was most lonely than he is now in the current timeline
Ey shut the **** up Don't cry like a little ***** if your brain can't understand it ok.... good
... ok yeah seems like a nonsensical confusing read.... if it bounces between tinelines over and over... then its not even really focising on character growth if your already seeing the person in the future... seems redundant
The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.The author always fucdup. He saw a series in TV and write one or two chapters copying them, next see a movie and again write another couple of chapters. The story is so disintregrated that I asked all to avoid the story.
Yet Loki kept trying to make the future the same, ie making him and the ice slùt get together or not stopping him from being hurt and invaded in ice with ice slùt. Honestly the romance ruined it completely and Loki forcing him to get with random thots made it worse
**** you
That makes sense...
Ya
wait did i just got a spoiler, did you mean in the future chapter the MC will be the LOKI!!!
Right
I didnt say that. But I will not deny it. I like people thinking about it. Who knows? Maybe you ae right
Slut? I think you have problem with women man. Chill
my only problem is with his relationship with Sophia like bro always got into good relationships with other girls but with Sophia it seems toxcic somewhat but OVERALLY I like this Shii OP MC ,Harem and rivalry between the future Sovereigns
