DarkEdenGod

I really like the direction this story is taking. Starting from the small movie Brightburn, you've expanded the lore in such a creative way and seamlessly connected it to the DC universe. It's genuinely enjoyable to read. I don't really have any tips—just keep doing what you're doing!

Author one tip. Use chatgtp to fix names and locations

Hey you have got a awesome looking story on your hand, some tips; It's okay to make mistakes; they're part of the learning process. Trust your voice, keep writing, and enjoy the creative ride. Your words matter, so keep at it! Keep it up.

Author, did you find more gems like this?? Can you let me know

One of the best GOT fanfic, I got no issues. so keep it up Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler

Great potential. Currently one of my favorites. Author keep it up! fillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerilleriller

Great ch keep it up ;)

One of the best rising stores on webnovel! Your doing great keep it up! its original and wel bought out, I love it! Filleer filter fileer filter

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