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Myumara
MyumaraLv56yr
2018-09-05 11:22

Kinda story you just wanna snuggle up in bed and read all day long. I didn't use the words literary masterpiece easily, but 200 years into the future this may be the new Romeo & Juliet.

Adopted Soldier

lynerparel
4.4
420 Chs

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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

thanks man :)

6yr
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squidsquish
squidsquishLv5

New Romeo & Juliet? You have me cracking up, thank you. That's a really good one.

6yr
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Kunnandi
KunnandiLv13

Hah this is good man

6yr
3
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Wow a lot of people like your comment even though your reading status is in zero. Thanks for this awesome review man. :)

6yr
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Myumara
MyumaraLv5

What can I say, I have a gift.

lynerparel:Wow a lot of people like your comment even though your reading status is in zero. Thanks for this awesome review man. :)
6yr
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TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

hold up... I don't think this counts as a talent...

Myumara:What can I say, I have a gift.
6yr
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Myumara
MyumaraLv5

If you don't think flattery is a talent I can tell you never had a job where you're entire future depends on your boss. Those who can't kiss ass don't get promoted.

TheGentlemenWorld:hold up... I don't think this counts as a talent...
6yr
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TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

YOU WANNA START THIS AGAIN!? *Smacks lips* Ya heard of connections?

Myumara:If you don't think flattery is a talent I can tell you never had a job where you're entire future depends on your boss. Those who can't kiss ass don't get promoted.
6yr
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Myumara
MyumaraLv5

*Bites teeth* I was in the military

TheGentlemenWorld:YOU WANNA START THIS AGAIN!? *Smacks lips* Ya heard of connections?
6yr
12
TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

*Rips lips off* Blackmail exists!

Myumara:*Bites teeth* I was in the military
6yr
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Myumara
MyumaraLv5

*Swallows tongue* That would get you sent to prison or court-martialed.

TheGentlemenWorld:*Rips lips off* Blackmail exists!
6yr
12
TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

*Swallows teeth* Have the right connections threaten the judge.

Myumara:*Swallows tongue* That would get you sent to prison or court-martialed.
6yr
9
Myumara
MyumaraLv5

You're just making no sense now man. You can threaten the accuser but never the judge.

TheGentlemenWorld:*Swallows teeth* Have the right connections threaten the judge.
6yr
7
TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

tf!? You can totally threaten the judge. After all, the judge has to say out loud the decision of the jury. I saw it happen once in an old show called Matlock

Myumara:You're just making no sense now man. You can threaten the accuser but never the judge.
6yr
7
THE_HAWK
THE_HAWKLv5

Lolz

squidsquish:New Romeo & Juliet? You have me cracking up, thank you. That's a really good one.
6yr
1
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Last time I checked you got five upvotes now your at 15, it seems like as I get popular your review, which by the way says you haven't read 1 chapter is the most voted review. :) Your incredible bro! Next time I'll look it might be at 50 upvotes or something.

6yr
Ranos
RanosLv13

So they both die at the end eh?

6yr
2
Angela_95
Angela_95Lv13

I hate Romeo and Juliet. They were both idiots.

6yr
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Auras
AurasLv10

Nice

6yr
1
6781_1876
6781_1876Lv5

Finally someone agrees

Angela_95:I hate Romeo and Juliet. They were both idiots.
6yr
7
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Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell. Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.

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It's so lame that it becomes funny with all the cold jokes. Typical orphan op mc acting like an idiot trying to act normal but always have insane choices like shooting the policemen because they prevent him going home.

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