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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor6yr
2018-08-27 11:10

Hi author here, this is my entry to the writing prompt for the school life theme. Once again hoping for support and for those who are reading Overwhelming Path don't worry not dropping that.

Adopted Soldier

lynerparel
4.4
420 Chs

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Lord_Delta
Lord_DeltaLv15

Ok thanks, question, if this comes with a good reaction, what would be the chapter uploads on a weekly basis and how far are you planning to carry this novel for?

6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Quite far my other work the overwhelming path is not doing as well as it used too, but ill still continue writing that. This oneis at least has 5 updates per week ant at most 9 chapters per week.

Lord_Delta:Ok thanks, question, if this comes with a good reaction, what would be the chapter uploads on a weekly basis and how far are you planning to carry this novel for?
6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Also i plan to write this with a lot of chapters so quite far. 😁

Lord_Delta:Ok thanks, question, if this comes with a good reaction, what would be the chapter uploads on a weekly basis and how far are you planning to carry this novel for?
6yr
2
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

I sincerely hope you continue reading and write a good review.😁😇😉

Lord_Delta:Ok thanks, question, if this comes with a good reaction, what would be the chapter uploads on a weekly basis and how far are you planning to carry this novel for?
6yr
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Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Is this harem?

6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Don't know still thinking about it, but the only thing sure is that there will be two girls, Rachel and another one.

Heaveah:Is this harem?
6yr
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Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Please make it harem pls

6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Like I said I'll think about it... Thanks for reading hope you like it, and willing to write a review about it. :)

Heaveah:Please make it harem pls
6yr
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Yuria
YuriaLv5

Please do not. Huhuhu I abhor harem-genre novels.

lynerparel:Like I said I'll think about it... Thanks for reading hope you like it, and willing to write a review about it. :)
6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

So many different opinions but like I said I'll just think about it. Depends on how the story would flow out, and how my characters develop as people.

Yuria:Please do not. Huhuhu I abhor harem-genre novels.
6yr
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Nur_Mianne
Nur_MianneLv10

No matter what the story goes, i will always read it. Hope with me liking it, it will give you the courage to continue writing... Do your best... Aja-aja fighting!!! 🤗

6yr
4
lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Thanks for the support, hope your able to write a review. :)

Nur_Mianne:No matter what the story goes, i will always read it. Hope with me liking it, it will give you the courage to continue writing... Do your best... Aja-aja fighting!!! 🤗
6yr
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Snake551g
Snake551gLv12

Im just in it to see ssome decent romance for once. Either way doesnt matter for me as long as it isnt forced and actually matches with how you develop the characters. Keep up the gokd work 👌

6yr
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lynerparel
lynerparelAuthor

Thanks for reading.

Snake551g:Im just in it to see ssome decent romance for once. Either way doesnt matter for me as long as it isnt forced and actually matches with how you develop the characters. Keep up the gokd work 👌
6yr
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AllMightyDragon
AllMightyDragonLv11

Alright!!! Another novel I can enjoy.

6yr
AllMightyDragon
AllMightyDragonLv11

I vote against that. I want to see Arthur san do a romance where they can go out without to much obstacles and drama. Just an opinion.

6yr
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AllMightyDragon
AllMightyDragonLv11

And yeah I can go with whatever as long as it's a good story.

6yr
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Farhan1998
Farhan1998Lv13

Don't worry as long as you keep writing we will continue reading and giving SS

6yr
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Akahana
AkahanaLv10

Maybe a "reverse harem" where our female MC is forced to choose between the MC and the other malex side characters and how she developed our chooses someone because of some reason and the male MC goes like *chablam!* "You're mine, and you know it" ;) lol, maybe, maybe. But idk xD

6yr
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Water0202020
Water0202020Lv6

Are those two gonna be part of true harem or pseudo JP type harem?

lynerparel:Don't know still thinking about it, but the only thing sure is that there will be two girls, Rachel and another one.
6yr
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Myumara
MyumaraLv5

Kinda story you just wanna snuggle up in bed and read all day long. I didn't use the words literary masterpiece easily, but 200 years into the future this may be the new Romeo & Juliet.

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PixelKid
PixelKidLv6

The story is good and its not rush... I especially like how the MC interacts with his Father... at first I thought that this story will be like his other novel, Overpowered MC with no goal xD... but boy I was wrong... I like this novel very much and also the other novel of yours especially his little wife Ellise personality is really interesting xD

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Crow_OF_Judgement
Crow_OF_JudgementLv3

Another one. This is like those korean k dramas where the mc is a martial artist, gets a job and just can't fit in. There was a guy who was writing things about his uncle being in the army and how he had a bad time adapting. Well, this is going to be harsh, but your uncle probably isn't the same level of genius as the mc here. The mc is a genius only when the author wants it. I don't know if I offend someone but I think even if people are in the army they have common sense. I am not in the army but I can tell that it's not always training and people converse with each other too. If you have read some novels like beauty and the bodyguard you can find 60% things that are similar to that novel here. But keep going.

6yr
Scarlettbunny
ScarlettbunnyLv11

Don't stop writing this! Even if the contest is over keep going this is so freaking cute I am dying from nose bleeds! 😀😀😀😀 I need more Alex and his awkwardness!!! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring you down.

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EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

The first and second chapter gave me hope... and that’s it. There is nothing special about this story. It’s just potential being destroyed. The character with great intelligence can not adapt, the whole story is just boring. Still, respect for trying.

6yr
F5_Sektleader
F5_SektleaderLv11

Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell. Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.

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Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv4

The plot is extremely predictable and for me is boring in every way. Just reading this made me wanna puke, the characters are no joke retarded and overall this **** is hella cliche

6yr
J_Enyl
J_EnylLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
ilsunny
ilsunnyLv6

It's so lame that it becomes funny with all the cold jokes. Typical orphan op mc acting like an idiot trying to act normal but always have insane choices like shooting the policemen because they prevent him going home.

6yr
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