Item: Adopted Soldier
Rating: 5
Author: PixelKid

PixelKidLv66yr

2018-08-30 01:03

The story is good and its not rush... I especially like how the MC interacts with his Father... at first I thought that this story will be like his other novel, Overpowered MC with no goal xD... but boy I was wrong... I like this novel very much and also the other novel of yours especially his little wife Ellise personality is really interesting xD

Adopted Soldier

lynerparel

4.4

420 Chs

Liked by 62 people

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Your dad xp

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Now this is interesting

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Nice

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I just started reading this and I agree with you

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