Roktah

what kind of filler crap is this?

own kid dude.

how is the invisibility charm going to move a stone? i'm sure you meant the levitation charm.

no, he needs them to purchase the jutsus and he spend 4k on the body flicker

should be lvl 5

already is lvl 4

i'll give it a shot, though i'll wait until there are some more chapters since i already know the gneneral story.

i don't expect him to be perfect but grateful for the chance to turn his life around is really not too much to ask for, afterall there are plenty of people in worse situations in that world and they don't get a system to fix it all.

story is alright but the mc is so f***ing annoying. he is constantly complaining about the system that enables him to save his family and gives him a chance at reaching the top.

thats fine but thats not 1 billion, its 100 million you're missing a zero and the following paragraphs still mention ten billion.