ABSenior

Overall, pretty decent, to be honest. I don't really like dark or overly game like plots, so those bolded characters in every chapter were a bit distracting. I'm probably just not used to reading on WN anymore. It's been a while. I only came back for this novel, lol. Overall, good job. It's just not my type, which is a pity. P.S: novel does have dark/evil potential btw. So you guys can try it, if that's what you came for.

nvm i am out. gl author. novel has potential, so do carry on. i just dont like the darkening type, so not for me imo. As i said i would rather have a selfish or evil mc with no romance, then seeing suffering for the sake of evil or darkening.

tbh his cheat is shit, and its just a burden. i would rather laugh and use proper means but do the worst thing possible. Thats the kind of mc appeal more to me than this sort of suffering kind who is changing cuz someone is pushing him like a leech. i will just carry on for now, its too rare to see something related to lotm

try to make it less gamey tbh and more grounded and natural if possible. This is by far the only readable novel for me, among all the others novels you posted ngl. Ofc thats just me lol, so u can ignore it.

i am out. i dont like this much of gamey novels ig. Anyway u guys enjoy.

smh too gamey tbh. i am out.

An advice, please edit the chapters after generating them with AI. Try to use simpler words and a more natural tone. Just because it's a Western fantasy doesn't mean the writing can't be simple or more natural. Most of us are used to reading Chinese web novels, so I think you should know what readers prefer.

Writing is good and readable. Just, don't drop.

Go On. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Even tho u r doing just Eng TL for this Qidian novel, but good work and also a nice find. Thx for the TL. Appreciate it. ------------------------------