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Pavols
PavolsLv55yr
2019-06-28 19:19

Wow, deleting any low ratings and criticism. Well, I guess it's normal when someone is insecure. Disappointed, Hemboy. 🙁 3,5 to 1 star, sorry...

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PersonMcpeopleface
PersonMcpeoplefaceLv14

Wait, authors can do that? the **** is the point of a rating system then?

Pavols
PavolsLv5

h t t p s://ibb.co/yymFY3H

PersonMcpeopleface:Wait, authors can do that? the **** is the point of a rating system then?
Pavols
PavolsLv5

in that screenshot, the girl that liked my review last also liked 8 other reviews from which 6 got removed

PersonMcpeopleface
PersonMcpeoplefaceLv14

I thought it was weird a system story had a 4.8 rating, when in my experience they're all mediocre, communist conspiracy indeed.

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HarRai
HarRaiLv4

This is just pathetic author you are pathetic

HarRai
HarRaiLv4

This is just pathetic author you are pathetic

HarRai
HarRaiLv4

This is just pathetic author you are pathetic

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

wrong one, dude, you should have said to the author of 'Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos ', not this one, maybe you guy just haven't roll down in the review section much and just assume the author delete it ? (beside this novel is actually good here, and not the 'wish fullfillment' type like the other novel there, of course it not perfect, but at least it not the hot 'garbage like other novel', if you still not convicted, you can check on the author discord, he can help answer any question you have) and you guy didn't see the part where the author actually listen to reader feedback ?, he even change some writing style after read feedback there

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

and he also add some idea that the reader provide for (of course after checking to see if it suitable or could make the story end up off the track, so it didn't make the story going down ) and no harem

AutoChaos
AutoChaosLv13

I find this novel just childrish and boring

GoldenFateCoin
GoldenFateCoinLv4

I like the fact that even on other novels, people are talking **** about the author of Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos. I, for one, completely agree though.

ArashiTenebris:wrong one, dude, you should have said to the author of 'Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos ', not this one, maybe you guy just haven't roll down in the review section much and just assume the author delete it ? (beside this novel is actually good here, and not the 'wish fullfillment' type like the other novel there, of course it not perfect, but at least it not the hot 'garbage like other novel', if you still not convicted, you can check on the author discord, he can help answer any question you have) and you guy didn't see the part where the author actually listen to reader feedback ?, he even change some writing style after read feedback there
vanilla_trash100
vanilla_trash100Lv1

Calling an author pathetic just makes you go back on your word when you are criticizing others , i.e. "whining about a story not having romance" ,, these comments have shown me that there's some complete asshat out there that needs to seriously think about what they comment about, n how it affects other people

HarRai:This is just pathetic author you are pathetic
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

fun fact, that author had try to release his own novel on royalroad.com, and guess what ?, his novel get banned because it contain mostly child **** (which I remember other review also point out about that problem, with the mc mostly f*ck with his harem all the time and not progress the plot and story much when reach to certain chapter) don't get me wrong, that side do allowed ***** theme and stuff, but if that story are contain mostly about **** and sex like that (like nearly half the novel), then expect your novel to be removed (you can google and see that it do release on royalroad, but get removed there)

GoldenFateCoin:I like the fact that even on other novels, people are talking **** about the author of Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos. I, for one, completely agree though.
GoldenFateCoin
GoldenFateCoinLv4

I know he is horrible, trust me. I had an hour long argument with him trying to tell him to accept criticism criticism and use it to fix your novel. Sadly, like any author with an ego, he couldn't figure out why accepting criticism is important, and helpful to your novel.

ArashiTenebris:fun fact, that author had try to release his own novel on royalroad.com, and guess what ?, his novel get banned because it contain mostly child **** (which I remember other review also point out about that problem, with the mc mostly f*ck with his harem all the time and not progress the plot and story much when reach to certain chapter) don't get me wrong, that side do allowed ***** theme and stuff, but if that story are contain mostly about **** and sex like that (like nearly half the novel), then expect your novel to be removed (you can google and see that it do release on royalroad, but get removed there)
GoldenFateCoin
GoldenFateCoinLv4

I've never used royalroad, but it seems like it is a very good site for reading stories, and fanfic. I kind of want to try it, especially if it doesn't allow that kind of garbage on there.

ArashiTenebris:fun fact, that author had try to release his own novel on royalroad.com, and guess what ?, his novel get banned because it contain mostly child **** (which I remember other review also point out about that problem, with the mc mostly f*ck with his harem all the time and not progress the plot and story much when reach to certain chapter) don't get me wrong, that side do allowed ***** theme and stuff, but if that story are contain mostly about **** and sex like that (like nearly half the novel), then expect your novel to be removed (you can google and see that it do release on royalroad, but get removed there)
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

you should give it a try here, at least it show a good stuff better than this site (if you look at the tops novel and stuff like that), of course sometime there are still trash managed to climb up, but only for a certain time. Here is a list you can check out for starter: The Voyager: Remastered Enlightened Empire Painting the Mists (a very good xianxia novel, too bad he move most of the chapter for amazon book already) Starcraft Unbound (hiatus, it still quite good though) Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece (a very good isekai novel, unlike the one we talk so far, hiatus though until the author find motivation to write, or until the ONce piece finally finished :v ) Until Death? (Refleshed Version) (you can check his other novel, most of them are good, and most of them you can read at any order, if you want, just google and a post will show the reading order there, or just ask reader) Blue Core Mother of Learning Data Dragon Danika Song of the Void Necrotourists The Daily Grind (like 'scp ikea' ?, then this will be for you, the office version) that some I share for you, there are still more (you should create account so you can bookmark those and see any new chapter there)

GoldenFateCoin:I've never used royalroad, but it seems like it is a very good site for reading stories, and fanfic. I kind of want to try it, especially if it doesn't allow that kind of garbage on there.
DG2
DG2Lv3

My comment got deleted :(

berxeq
berxeqLv5

this story is rated 4.6 like how the fk it is anything above 3.5 is mind boggling . i guess author deletes all the negative review or may i say the truths.

plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5

Went here unintentionally but found this which I need! I'm so bored and finding these many novels to read feels good! Even though some are on hiatus, it's still fine.. and the web novels you listed aren't some average (average on a scale of royalroad) novels! Thank youuu😽

ArashiTenebris:you should give it a try here, at least it show a good stuff better than this site (if you look at the tops novel and stuff like that), of course sometime there are still trash managed to climb up, but only for a certain time. Here is a list you can check out for starter: The Voyager: Remastered Enlightened Empire Painting the Mists (a very good xianxia novel, too bad he move most of the chapter for amazon book already) Starcraft Unbound (hiatus, it still quite good though) Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece (a very good isekai novel, unlike the one we talk so far, hiatus though until the author find motivation to write, or until the ONce piece finally finished :v ) Until Death? (Refleshed Version) (you can check his other novel, most of them are good, and most of them you can read at any order, if you want, just google and a post will show the reading order there, or just ask reader) Blue Core Mother of Learning Data Dragon Danika Song of the Void Necrotourists The Daily Grind (like 'scp ikea' ?, then this will be for you, the office version) that some I share for you, there are still more (you should create account so you can bookmark those and see any new chapter there)
TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

Seems that there is a bunch of people who are against either the author or system based/including stories. IDK what the talk about deleting comments is about but I think that the author had a good reason for it based on how these people are reacting whether all the others know the full story or not. This person is spamming this bad comment/review as well.

HarRai:This is just pathetic author you are pathetic
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pipMcDohl
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In a typical Chinese cultivation light novel, the main character start from the lowest strength only to rise above all. For this miraculous outcome the MC has the help of something that is a complete cheat for cultivating. The MC along the way encounter bad guys, selfish idiots who think they are better than the rest and attack and try to humiliate other just because why not. Trashes. The MC will punish those selfish idiots by attacking and trying to humiliate them because he think he is better than them and because he have the excuses that they were the one who started it. The MC is a freaking psychopath that can murder those who offend him just like that. The other characters that exist are the good guys, that are meant to witness the power of the MC and give him opportunity to get violent with the excuse of protecting the weak against the bad guys. side characters, good or bad, don't need deep personality the just need to trigger the events and thus are shallow. The women are especially shallow thanks to sexist culture. They are just their to fall in love and be sexual trophy. The plots are usually rushed and full of holes. So where is World Domination System among the mass of Chinese cultivation novels? Woman: So far almost no girls in sight. no sexism aside from the fact that all the key spots are hold by men. The MC is not a murderous psychopath. But only because he think he is not powerful enough yet to kill those who offend him. so psychopath is yes. are the side characters only divided with good one and bad one just for the sake of having the MC get violent? Yes, the bad guys will get offended over nothing and the good one are way to kind to be realistic. It's all white or all black. The characters are very shallow. The story don't really care about character building to the point that the one and only friend of the MC is a character that we don't see interacting with the MC. He is just mentionned here and there, and of course he will get bullied by bad guys. So his job is to be a token that trigger the MC's revenge. He don't need to talk or think. the story is only focus on the growth of the MC and him kicking asses. Finally the cultivation cheat Yep it's there of course. it will allow the MC to get strong in everything. strong body, magician, magic craftsman, etc... The originality is his cheat pushing the MC toward world conquest. it should be something that bring an abnormally high deepness to the intrigue and plots. But no as expected of a typical Chinese cultivation random story, this become disappointing as well. Let me spoil the first financial success of the MC as an example: to cultivate energy is required, bloc of ether can release useful energy and thus are pricey. Alas mosquitoes are eating the blocs of ether. In order to protect the warehouse from mosquitoes, the usual method is... to erect expensive magical barriers that only last a few month then must be replaced. The MC find a way to bait and trap mosquitoes, protecting the warehouse at a cheaper cost and thus making tons of money. Flaw one: why stopping simple mosquitoes with expansive military grade magical barrier when you can just build air-proof warehouse and store the bloc of ether in pouches airtight shut? it's just normal weak mosquitoes... it's like killing flies with a rocket launcher. Flaw two: the MC doesn't test his invention over the two month it is supposed to be effective. The effectiveness of his traps might decrease over time for unknown reasons and it can all backfire in his face. Flaw three: the MC sell his product at a given price and receive the entire sum of money as benefit... what about the price for opening his store, what about paying salaries to the manager, etc.. The kingdom is supposed to have heavy taxes policy that cause turmoil and anger among the citizens, yet the MC don't pay any taxes? The plots are rushed and only what allow the MC to be a righteous violent psychopath is relevant for the author. So yeah... Overall another typical cheap cultivation story here that just copy past all the cliché except for sexy women as trophies.

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