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TheMage
TheMageLv46yr
2018-08-25 22:09

What can I say? I stumbled upon this gem and I am really surprised that it is only in the top 50 when it can easily match the current no 1 in the original rankings. The writing quality is very good (English may not be my mother tongue but I have read countless novels and this one's quality is pretty damn high), the main character seems to be (as of now) a pretty reasonable fellow, the pacing feels pretty good (up till now I never got the urge to scim through parts) and the world-building parts are neither too long nor too short. That being said, this is all my personal opinion which may be bolstered by the fact I read through A LOT of mtl or junk in the last couple of days, so bash on me all you want (idc anyway). But when LWS manages to reach rank 1 in the original rankings, this story (which imo is better than LWS) easily deserves at least a rank in the top 5.

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KillerHemboy
KillerHemboyAuthor

THANK YOU! I really appreciate your words! Idk with what power you said those words abut the rankings, but we are in top 20 now and i hope we stay there! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

RandomNovelReader
RandomNovelReaderLv5

n.6 and not stopping

ObviousIron
ObviousIronLv12

Let us keep it going

Lucianardac
LucianardacLv14

Wow!!!!!!!!!!

tiaallen135
tiaallen135Lv10

Yes

Taylor_White_2992
Taylor_White_2992Lv10

Dont ever stop with the uploads

nulltraverser
nulltraverserLv15

Agreed

Lord_CronutX
Lord_CronutXLv4

Keep up man....?

Lord_CronutX
Lord_CronutXLv4

Keep up man....

Jack_Balu
Jack_BaluLv3

I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

What was the full name for the LWS your mentioning?

Malick619
Malick619Lv11

Nice

9RA
9RALv2

As of now, it's ranked 5. But hopefully, it can one day take the number 1 spot.

Daoist773007
Daoist773007Lv1

will there be a second seaso of this book ?

MrTotoro
MrTotoroLv12

Do u realize what the world Original means? This is, be no means, original at all. There are many other novels with a similar story line. .

Kujis98
Kujis98Lv12

:)

Beast_Thomp
Beast_ThompLv2

Truly

Phantom_Bear
Phantom_BearLv1

Can you please check out my novel, "D Shark Unit"? It's a modern military novel with power of system and no other things like super powers, etc.

Jack_Balu:I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out
Phantom_Bear
Phantom_BearLv1

Can you please check out my novel, "D Shark Unit"? It's a modern military novel with power of system and no other things like super powers, etc.

Jack_Balu:I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out
Jack_Balu
Jack_BaluLv3

Ok I will

Phantom_Bear:Can you please check out my novel, "D Shark Unit"? It's a modern military novel with power of system and no other things like super powers, etc.
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pipMcDohl
pipMcDohlLv5

In a typical Chinese cultivation light novel, the main character start from the lowest strength only to rise above all. For this miraculous outcome the MC has the help of something that is a complete cheat for cultivating. The MC along the way encounter bad guys, selfish idiots who think they are better than the rest and attack and try to humiliate other just because why not. Trashes. The MC will punish those selfish idiots by attacking and trying to humiliate them because he think he is better than them and because he have the excuses that they were the one who started it. The MC is a freaking psychopath that can murder those who offend him just like that. The other characters that exist are the good guys, that are meant to witness the power of the MC and give him opportunity to get violent with the excuse of protecting the weak against the bad guys. side characters, good or bad, don't need deep personality the just need to trigger the events and thus are shallow. The women are especially shallow thanks to sexist culture. They are just their to fall in love and be sexual trophy. The plots are usually rushed and full of holes. So where is World Domination System among the mass of Chinese cultivation novels? Woman: So far almost no girls in sight. no sexism aside from the fact that all the key spots are hold by men. The MC is not a murderous psychopath. But only because he think he is not powerful enough yet to kill those who offend him. so psychopath is yes. are the side characters only divided with good one and bad one just for the sake of having the MC get violent? Yes, the bad guys will get offended over nothing and the good one are way to kind to be realistic. It's all white or all black. The characters are very shallow. The story don't really care about character building to the point that the one and only friend of the MC is a character that we don't see interacting with the MC. He is just mentionned here and there, and of course he will get bullied by bad guys. So his job is to be a token that trigger the MC's revenge. He don't need to talk or think. the story is only focus on the growth of the MC and him kicking asses. Finally the cultivation cheat Yep it's there of course. it will allow the MC to get strong in everything. strong body, magician, magic craftsman, etc... The originality is his cheat pushing the MC toward world conquest. it should be something that bring an abnormally high deepness to the intrigue and plots. But no as expected of a typical Chinese cultivation random story, this become disappointing as well. Let me spoil the first financial success of the MC as an example: to cultivate energy is required, bloc of ether can release useful energy and thus are pricey. Alas mosquitoes are eating the blocs of ether. In order to protect the warehouse from mosquitoes, the usual method is... to erect expensive magical barriers that only last a few month then must be replaced. The MC find a way to bait and trap mosquitoes, protecting the warehouse at a cheaper cost and thus making tons of money. Flaw one: why stopping simple mosquitoes with expansive military grade magical barrier when you can just build air-proof warehouse and store the bloc of ether in pouches airtight shut? it's just normal weak mosquitoes... it's like killing flies with a rocket launcher. Flaw two: the MC doesn't test his invention over the two month it is supposed to be effective. The effectiveness of his traps might decrease over time for unknown reasons and it can all backfire in his face. Flaw three: the MC sell his product at a given price and receive the entire sum of money as benefit... what about the price for opening his store, what about paying salaries to the manager, etc.. The kingdom is supposed to have heavy taxes policy that cause turmoil and anger among the citizens, yet the MC don't pay any taxes? The plots are rushed and only what allow the MC to be a righteous violent psychopath is relevant for the author. So yeah... Overall another typical cheap cultivation story here that just copy past all the cliché except for sexy women as trophies.

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