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ah i see. i don't know why the mc described him as spoiled if this is the case given how he already lost his parents AND put himself through extremely grueling training that most people wouldn't even consider.
spoiled? he's over 18, so i'd assume this is far past when his parents got killed. In nearly ever comic timeline i'm aware of, he should already be far into or done with his training at this point in time. So, does the mc NOT know that or is this an alternate timeline?
apparently he went to yale in the comics, so in this universe, did he go to this university instead?
back in my day, these cultivation protagonists weren't just handed every bit of help they needed. they had to rip, crawl and tear their way through the cultivation world to advance even a bit. now, all the mc has to do is sneeze once or twice and they get rewarded heavily by the omnipotent system... tsk, tsk, tsk.
I'd imagine this probably doesn't account for things like qi injection and gifts from the mc
bro just created his own entire narrative within the story lmao
basically, without extremely blatant and unashamed plot devices, there is no realistic way that the main character could ever catch up to the ultra mega geniuses that are inevitably going to appear in his long, long lifespan.
dozens of paragraphs with minimal to no grammatical errors. *silence* minor numerical error "man these translators are so fucking trash bro. like holy moly, this is definitely machine translation! god damnit, i'm so tired of these horrible translations!"
Is this NOT the simpler option which would make his life easier?