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Julie_E
Julie_ELv116yr
2018-12-10 04:19

I rated the translation low only because there is a far superior English translation online although it ends at Vol 2 Ch 19. This other translation is EPIC and does not exclude parts of dialogue and action as this one does. This [trackfest's] translation is so beautiful. In some places, the beauty of the language and the translator's gift of poetry, knowledge of Chinese literature, language, and culture makes for a most profound, emotional, and unforgettable read. She included footnotes that demystified the Chinese language. She explained references re words, phrases, the vernacular, and even common cliches/analogies used by the original author. Trackfest is/was in med school and I suppose the translation project became overwhelming. I DO HOPE that one day that she will return. This translation is like instant hot chocolate made w/water that can satisfy a craving. Trackfest's translation is like instant hot chocolate made w/cream. Rich, memorable and almost indigestable. Such a confident and moving translation speaks to her superb fluency in English AND Chinese. Poetry, poetry, more poetry. I did contact Trackfest about her translation b/c I could not believe what I was reading. She said that most Chinese books in this genre were written in this image-rich, colorful way. My resolution since then is to become fluent in Chinese so I can unlock 5,000 years of literature.

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Kathinja
KathinjaLv10

That's a crying shame then. I had a feeling there's more to the translation... I don't think the other translator will continue the work as Qidian has quite the reputation of squashing other translations except for the ones on their platform. We can only hope that they hire Trackest for this.

Yuuneev
YuuneevLv2

I wondered if it was the author’s or the translator’s fault that I got so lost 😅 I felt there were some very big parts missing every now and then but, since this is the first ever cn webnovel I read I wasn’t sure if it was my lack of familiarity with the format or something else

glacedeesse
glacedeesseLv2

Hi Julie. Do you know if Trackers will continue with her translation? I have tried to contact her on her website but received no reply. Get translations are indeed beautiful and I would love to encourage her to continue. Is there any way to contact her? Thanks in advance for your help.

BobbyLaw
BobbyLawLv15

There's a plus side and down side to taking out dialogue. Down side is obvious as we miss out on the author's imagination. Plus side is chapters cost less since we there's less of a word count per chapter.

Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

don't read it then. it doesn't cost you anything.

BobbyLaw:There's a plus side and down side to taking out dialogue. Down side is obvious as we miss out on the author's imagination. Plus side is chapters cost less since we there's less of a word count per chapter.
julieawms
julieawmsLv4

I love that translation too! I'm still grateful to have more of the story here, instead of having to wait for her to come back and translate more!

Ali_Mingert
Ali_MingertLv2

Ooh

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Philip_MikeLv1

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MarianInairaM
MarianInairaMLv5

I was expecting a somewhat decent story but I have to say, this is absolute s***. Wouldn’t recommend. Ever. If you like it then you haven’t read enough good novels( or your standards are too low, it’s one or the other). I read up to the seventh chapter before I felt that my brain cells were dying to fast and I need to stop( I need these few cells I have to study can’t afford to waste them). The translation quality is very good don’t get me wrong, but the plot is ABSOLUTE sh*t!! The author put every cliche possible. ( you have the classic cliff that FLs love to fall off, oh you can’t foget the over powered waste and my personal favourite the lover leaving them for Their sister/ senior or junior martial sister) What pissed me off is where in the beginning shes like “no I can’t show off my amazing skills it to dangerous, even if it’s the man I love!” Give her two chapters and she’s already fighting for a stupid reason then gets imprisoned ( that really had me mad, it was too easy and happened too fast and I was confused) and thrown off a cliff by her lovers fiancé. This fuyao girl is so stupid and inconsistent that it hurts. Not to mention the flow of the story I feel that there’s something wrong with it. Apparently it has a drama too!! It can’t be as bad as this can it? You know what I think it’s just my standards are too high, but at the same time I refuse to lower them and find this enjoyable. That 2.5 start rating is because the translator deserves some credit but even that can’t save it. It can’t only be me than finds this a waste of time? And if you find it good why? I’m most probably being a b*tch like usual but ohh well. Sorry about that just had to get that off my chest, now excuse me while I do something productive with my life.

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