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iyoureancestor
iyoureancestorLv126yr
2018-11-13 15:51

Lack of explanation, and full of plot holes. And I hated the cliché scenario building up by author. Tomb raider>reincarnated>immature contradicted to her past life explanation about her personality>trash female lead(hiding her skill)>mysterious meeting of a handsome male 2d>white lily beshes and so on. This is like patching every plot of every famous novel.

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Darian
DarianLv6

If this is a 4.5 star review, you're insanely generous with your stars.

iyoureancestor
iyoureancestorLv12

Haha. Well, I just disappointed on the lack of details, but not on plot even if it's a cliché one.🤣

Darian:If this is a 4.5 star review, you're insanely generous with your stars.
foreverhistorybook
foreverhistorybookLv11

Is there any romance?

iyoureancestor
iyoureancestorLv12

Yup. But it's an awkward force romance, if I may say. The author couldn't write properly a romantic scenes or a "natural" coincidence. Like what I says in this review, some scenes are like steal from other famous novel or more like cliche.

foreverhistorybook:Is there any romance?
foreverhistorybook
foreverhistorybookLv11

Is it slow romance or?

iyoureancestor:Yup. But it's an awkward force romance, if I may say. The author couldn't write properly a romantic scenes or a "natural" coincidence. Like what I says in this review, some scenes are like steal from other famous novel or more like cliche.
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MarianInairaM
MarianInairaMLv5

I was expecting a somewhat decent story but I have to say, this is absolute s***. Wouldn’t recommend. Ever. If you like it then you haven’t read enough good novels( or your standards are too low, it’s one or the other). I read up to the seventh chapter before I felt that my brain cells were dying to fast and I need to stop( I need these few cells I have to study can’t afford to waste them). The translation quality is very good don’t get me wrong, but the plot is ABSOLUTE sh*t!! The author put every cliche possible. ( you have the classic cliff that FLs love to fall off, oh you can’t foget the over powered waste and my personal favourite the lover leaving them for Their sister/ senior or junior martial sister) What pissed me off is where in the beginning shes like “no I can’t show off my amazing skills it to dangerous, even if it’s the man I love!” Give her two chapters and she’s already fighting for a stupid reason then gets imprisoned ( that really had me mad, it was too easy and happened too fast and I was confused) and thrown off a cliff by her lovers fiancé. This fuyao girl is so stupid and inconsistent that it hurts. Not to mention the flow of the story I feel that there’s something wrong with it. Apparently it has a drama too!! It can’t be as bad as this can it? You know what I think it’s just my standards are too high, but at the same time I refuse to lower them and find this enjoyable. That 2.5 start rating is because the translator deserves some credit but even that can’t save it. It can’t only be me than finds this a waste of time? And if you find it good why? I’m most probably being a b*tch like usual but ohh well. Sorry about that just had to get that off my chest, now excuse me while I do something productive with my life.

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