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2018-11-13 15:42

So many plot holes, and lack of explanation. The author just throwing all scenes and doesn't gave an explanation, and move to another scenario. Plus, so many cliché are here too, like meeting a mysterious handsome male, hiding her skills, arrogant characters, idiot elders, ex-fiance and etc. But other than that, it's quite decent plot. Author just needed to add details on some thing's, so that it can avoid confusion.

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MarianInairaM
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I was expecting a somewhat decent story but I have to say, this is absolute s***. Wouldn’t recommend. Ever. If you like it then you haven’t read enough good novels( or your standards are too low, it’s one or the other). I read up to the seventh chapter before I felt that my brain cells were dying to fast and I need to stop( I need these few cells I have to study can’t afford to waste them). The translation quality is very good don’t get me wrong, but the plot is ABSOLUTE sh*t!! The author put every cliche possible. ( you have the classic cliff that FLs love to fall off, oh you can’t foget the over powered waste and my personal favourite the lover leaving them for Their sister/ senior or junior martial sister) What pissed me off is where in the beginning shes like “no I can’t show off my amazing skills it to dangerous, even if it’s the man I love!” Give her two chapters and she’s already fighting for a stupid reason then gets imprisoned ( that really had me mad, it was too easy and happened too fast and I was confused) and thrown off a cliff by her lovers fiancé. This fuyao girl is so stupid and inconsistent that it hurts. Not to mention the flow of the story I feel that there’s something wrong with it. Apparently it has a drama too!! It can’t be as bad as this can it? You know what I think it’s just my standards are too high, but at the same time I refuse to lower them and find this enjoyable. That 2.5 start rating is because the translator deserves some credit but even that can’t save it. It can’t only be me than finds this a waste of time? And if you find it good why? I’m most probably being a b*tch like usual but ohh well. Sorry about that just had to get that off my chest, now excuse me while I do something productive with my life.

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