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VKSS1602Author6yr
2018-10-19 08:38

Hey guys! The atory starts slowly but after Arjun meets Magmeel it will get much more exitement. I hope you wil encourage our work and enjoys it.

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SofoklinoLv14

I would be very interested in editing this story it’s really great

VKSS1602Author

You don't know but I'm waiting for the ending.. The ending will definitely blow your mind! Unfortunately, this story will probably reach more than 2000 chapters

Neo_RagnarLv14

I'll be the one asking then is it "HAREM" ?

VKSS1602Author

No... definitely not

VKSS1602Author

not a chance.. This story will be a gem especially when Arjun and co. fights the 12 supreme gods! But unfortunately everyone needs to wait for that fight

Sofoklino:I would be very interested in editing this story it’s really great
SofoklinoLv14

I was talking about EDITing the chapters mistakes word count and stuff it is an amazing story and I believe I could make a lot easier to read I wouldn’t mess with the story what so ever but it’s all good keep going you doing a great job

VKSS1602Author

oh! I'm sorry! It was my mistake.. Thanks for the love

Sofoklino:I was talking about EDITing the chapters mistakes word count and stuff it is an amazing story and I believe I could make a lot easier to read I wouldn’t mess with the story what so ever but it’s all good keep going you doing a great job
VKSS1602Author

I'll consider it and get back to you

Sofoklino:I was talking about EDITing the chapters mistakes word count and stuff it is an amazing story and I believe I could make a lot easier to read I wouldn’t mess with the story what so ever but it’s all good keep going you doing a great job
VKSS1602Author

contact me with the name Kamanth Chigurupati in Facebook we will discuss in fb

Sofoklino:I was talking about EDITing the chapters mistakes word count and stuff it is an amazing story and I believe I could make a lot easier to read I wouldn’t mess with the story what so ever but it’s all good keep going you doing a great job
VKSS1602Author

Contact me on Facebook @Kamanth Chigurupati.... I accept your proposal We will talk about the rest of the details in FB

Sofoklino:I would be very interested in editing this story it’s really great
FangMingLv5

This has HAREM? Personally I hope not.

VKSS1602:You don't know but I'm waiting for the ending.. The ending will definitely blow your mind! Unfortunately, this story will probably reach more than 2000 chapters
MortiferLv14

Is the mc OP, my good sir?

VKSS1602:Contact me on Facebook @Kamanth Chigurupati.... I accept your proposal We will talk about the rest of the details in FB
VKSS1602Author

no... but he will have no rival among the people with same cultivation level

Mortifer:Is the mc OP, my good sir?
ReturnToVirginityLv5

you should have name them Natsu and Igneel lol.

VKSS1602Author

Concept is same... but story is entirely different... You will know how different i is from fairy tail as you keep reading... Thank you

ReturnToVirginity:you should have name them Natsu and Igneel lol.
Daoist_ParadoxLv4

Are you sure the Dragon's name is Magneel and not Dronacharya ? Just kidding ! Best of luck !

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JasonenrickLv14

It is really a good Book but i dropped it very fast at chapter 70 because the MC always had smth witch made him unique but in chapter 70 he wasn't anymore and this dissapointed me a lot . It is like a Person reincarnateds with a system but every person he wants to gets the same system and same Powers it just doen't make the MC Unique....more simpe and normal and that is what i can't accept. The Story and grammar and everything is really good but i can't accept it. But for every other person on here pls go read this and enjoy because it is really good. I would even think about donating smth to this story because i really like it but ......Chapter 70 destroyed all my Fun. And the worst part it that if i love a story like this is that i always imagine to be the MC so when he is happy i am kindy happy too and when he is say i am as well. But when in CH 70 he got in my eyes " Normal" and that totally destroyed my mood for the day ;( If he gave them the talent to reach the power of Light and Darkness ....OKAY But he should always be stronger or it isn't interesting anymore or not for me. Imagine Ultimate scheming system where all his wives always have the same Cultivation like him Blank. That's the same here. Before he was destined to be the TOP ALONE but not not. It is like you are born the be the Emperor but then they say there have to be 10 Emperors with the same Power ????? Blank right OK srry got off the point a bit. What i want to say for me it got off the path and it isn't smth i get myself to read but it is really a highty quality Novel and i think you should read it if you don't mind what i wrote before . **: Author don't take it personally because i think you are doing great ;)

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