Daoist_Paradox

Without activists you wouldn't be living the good life you have right now.

Good work by author. Good: 1. Goblin MC stories are relatively rare, even now, and good ones even rarer. 2. Writing is decent, characters are unique. Story doesn't feel disjoint. Bad: 1. Feels like amateur work when reading. 2. Utter lack of consistency in the world itself. Goblins show high level intelligence but haven't figured out things like bows and arrows, even though they surely might've seen others use it. 3. Protagonist's thought process is less realistic. He begins worrying about the demon lord when his tribe is barely at the village level and is fending against external threats from other goblin tribe and elves. 4. Story is rated R18 but readers need to wait a long time to get any development. 5. The story is unable to define itself and create a unique identity. Whether it's kingdom management, action, adventure, romance, hentai, etc. 6. I found the beginning chapters a bit slow, especially the 3 chapters where 3 different female goblin characters were introduced. I think that's a huge killer and turn off.

The story was fine but I just could not continue after the MC peed into the orc woman's mouth. The chapter and the novel description itself should have a scat warning or something. It's a real pity since I wanted to see how to story would go on.

You need to edit your review. It's absolutely unreadable. Divide it in paragraphs.

LOL

Ya. We came here to read about an OP MC.

This is just another "China nambah one" novel. It's a waste of time to read it. It's even hard to understand why Webnovel even translates suck kind of novels.

where's the romance, marriage, and divorce part?

people

Only an idiot would think like this. This is the whole "computers will take our jobs" thing all over again.