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Shoopuff1Lv126yr
2019-02-27 07:17

I liked the concept of the story, but the Main character is telling every tom dick and harry about his power, I couldnt take it anymore, it supposedly a big secrets and they have an assassination organization after them known for intelligence. Anyone could be a spy, even friends. But thats my take its still a good read give it a try.

THE KING OF THE UNIVERSE

VKSS1602
4.7
1002 Chs

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VKSS1602Author

Thanks for the reply...Let ne clarify one thing first.. Arjun is the Will of the universe... So all the life forms who draws power from him will have their mind connected with him. No matter how much they try, they can't hide any of their secrets from Arjun.. Arjun revealed his secret only to those people who got their will changed by him.. So if there really exist a spy among them... They can't hide it from Arjun at all.. As the will of the universe he can kill all the life forms who draws power from him with just his thoughts... So the things will be spy proof... That's why Arjun revealed his secrets to some of the people

6yr
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AlmightyKingLv13

Despite the MC having no magic core, he didn't give up and keep training his Will so that he can fulfill his wish... F*ck this.... 140 characters!!!!!

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JasonenrickLv14

It is really a good Book but i dropped it very fast at chapter 70 because the MC always had smth witch made him unique but in chapter 70 he wasn't anymore and this dissapointed me a lot . It is like a Person reincarnateds with a system but every person he wants to gets the same system and same Powers it just doen't make the MC Unique....more simpe and normal and that is what i can't accept. The Story and grammar and everything is really good but i can't accept it. But for every other person on here pls go read this and enjoy because it is really good. I would even think about donating smth to this story because i really like it but ......Chapter 70 destroyed all my Fun. And the worst part it that if i love a story like this is that i always imagine to be the MC so when he is happy i am kindy happy too and when he is say i am as well. But when in CH 70 he got in my eyes " Normal" and that totally destroyed my mood for the day ;( If he gave them the talent to reach the power of Light and Darkness ....OKAY But he should always be stronger or it isn't interesting anymore or not for me. Imagine Ultimate scheming system where all his wives always have the same Cultivation like him Blank. That's the same here. Before he was destined to be the TOP ALONE but not not. It is like you are born the be the Emperor but then they say there have to be 10 Emperors with the same Power ????? Blank right OK srry got off the point a bit. What i want to say for me it got off the path and it isn't smth i get myself to read but it is really a highty quality Novel and i think you should read it if you don't mind what i wrote before . **: Author don't take it personally because i think you are doing great ;)

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VKSS1602Author

Hey guys! The atory starts slowly but after Arjun meets Magmeel it will get much more exitement. I hope you wil encourage our work and enjoys it.

6yr
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HonorableLv2

Hello man. That`s a nice book. Can you give me two answers? 1. How many chapters will be? 2. Can you give me all genres and tags? Thank you for the book.

6yr
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No_Name_PasserbyLv13

Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story... The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine"..... Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores.... But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....

6yr
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ShadexRayLv5

Pretty nice story progress. Loving the limitless potential and the various wonders in the world. Like the "cultivation" system as well. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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ZeroLinaMentLv4

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SpaceTimeSovereignLv14

Shamless 5 star rating because i really do love this book. It's a great book and I would recommend this book to anyone who is tired of the standard wuxia novel, this is the book to read.

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MusponLv13

This is a diamond in the ruff. Fuck why do they have to do this to us 140 characters

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