Hi I found this site through a friend of mine, Ive red 2 books so far, yours and another called Harry Potter and the Mystical Journey (Author Falling Sword).Both of you have talent and it comes out in your writing. Unfortunately time and life wait for no man,and writting takes up a lot of both.That these are your first books says a lot about both of you,and yes there are parts in both books that could do with tweaking her and there, but hey for 1st timers A+ for great imagination and giving it a go.
Liked by 5 people
LIKE