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To be honest, I haven't any selfish character as this guy. Well, he does have a strong will to live but let's see what battle he will have to face with this selfishness and how he might make is way to the straight way. Over all the writing style is good, liked the phrasing and grows a great interest to keep going. KEEP IT UP.

great good luck

good point. strong noticing reader. thanks. The novel is quiet long so perhaps in some parts or chapter further you will know the answer. And it won't let you down.

Thanks. Surely will do it. I will improve it.

thanks for notifying

It's less but has a great story to tell. I expect a lot from it. The writing style is great and has amazing display of the world building. Keep it up, author

i read it and i am willing to know more about his life. The story grew interesting from time to time and i am certain this guy won't let you down. None the writer or the Mc. The writing style was amazing and quite remarkable in understanding. Great work. Author!

This is a good book. It's writing style is simple and has a clear understanding of everything around the reader. The explanation is clear as this book has got a hidden potential in it. Great work, Keep it up! Looking for more chapters

I am keep up with it. Loved this books a lot. It is a different type, lots of mysteries, excitement, threats and darkness. It's a gem. Plus, the writing style is pretty amazing as it goes very sharply in every piece of words. Hope this one wins the contest. Keep up the good work.

HAHa what a grim