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_Nocturnal_
_Nocturnal_Lv46yr
2019-01-10 15:13

Below average, very badly written. Many sections felt either plagurized or forced for plot advancement. I get that the mc is like a 5 year old kid, but seriously why does there have to be so many misunderstandings? Misunderstandings are rarely well used and usually just serve to make the reader very annoyed and frustrated

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_Nocturnal_
_Nocturnal_Lv4

That was kinda harsh. Meant very poorly designed plot adcancement. Clear plot armor and such.

LazySky
LazySkyAuthor

Well I’m sorry you feel this way. I am always trying to improve, though, so I appreciate the honest review.

Bianca_Murphy
Bianca_MurphyLv11

Wow! Criticism doesn't always have to be harsh 8n order for the point to get across.

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