webnovel
F5S_GuardianElder
F5S_GuardianElderLv66yr
2018-07-04 14:19

Finally, other Art that I couldn't wait for Update... As Reader, I'm Pleased with more interesting PLOT with taged "Series" behind it. More Mature Stories in this series is indication for the Author progress in writing. G O O D J O B . . .

The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

Gyihhuhu_
4.1
24 Chs

Liked by 3 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Gyihhuhu_
Gyihhuhu_Author

Reveal spoiler

6yr

Water0202020
Water0202020Lv6

I stake my god-like stellar reputation again to write a review. Do you want to see snu~snu on super beauties? Do you want hypnosis with different Sex scenes? Do you want mc to kill his enemies? Search no more. Constructive criticism: 1) naked thigh stockings in mature beauty with sexy thighs or in onee-chan characters😏. 2) diverse personalities other than yandere. 3) sexy foreign childhood female's cherry🙄😏 4) some ffm or fffm sandwich😏 5) Not abandoning or sharing his Sex slaves if they are super beautiful. But, girls like haruno and sakura's sister can die😈👿 6) no netorare/rase. Even with slaves....as long as they are not Bitches. 7) Onee-chan incessstttttt and her V-card😍 8) Not too dark/twisted personality. Atleast, he should not abandon his girls.

6yr
Zeraphin
ZeraphinLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Tyrant1103
Tyrant1103Lv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4

The story is different than others, so if you are tired to read the 10th clone of whatever, this is really a new story. The writing is good, not without errors, but it feels fluent. The basic idea of this system seems good so far (somewhere before chapter 10). I think this is a good book, it is just so that I don't like the "speed" of the story. Everything takes forever. Someone having ***... pages. Imagining something... pages. Walking somewhere... pages. Just going from his room to the bath can take many pages. So, I think it is a book many will like because there are many good points about it, but I personally do not like it. I still give 2 stars to story development, because - even when I don't like the speed of the story's progression - I like the new ideas of the story and I totally like the way the protagonist/author sees sexual activity as a normal activity instead of using "pervert this" and "pervert that" because someone likes some and/or is having ***.

6yr
TobiLu
TobiLuLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr
SnagSoup
SnagSoupLv12

I have read my fair share of novels and I can happily say that this series is a serious gem and deserves to be spread around. There are very interesting characters and the story development is great. I just hope the author will keep consistent updates and not drop there series and I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

6yr
P2nda
P2ndaLv3

Started off interesting, then author adds in lots of fillers to extend the length of story. The story becomes unfocused and just all over the place. Wouldn't recommend as it feels like the author doesn't know what kind of story he is trying to tell.

6yr
HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4

Hypocrite mc. Author just keeps on going from one situation to another which involves abuse and rape everytime. The MC is getting more and more hypocritical and does one scene ever get completed? You have one story in one chapter and it jumps to another in another chapter. If the main topic is not revenge, which I think it is not then finish the revenge thing so we can move on from all the rape and abuse **** so that we can see what the **** he is actually going to do after the revenge is done. Don't just jump from a story to another. You should read trassford's trading club.

6yr
CavaloneZ
CavaloneZLv2

This novel has different story from other hypnosis stories.Every character have their own personalities,and the victim off the hypnosis did not become mindless and still can think by their own.the system also is interesting,not just a machine that help the host.Also,when will Tenshi train martial arts ? Note:This is my first ever review,sorry if there anything wrong with it.English is not my native languange,sorry if there are some problems.

6yr
Related Stories

Stealing Spree

Note: There's no magic in this novel. This was previously in the Realistic Fiction genre but it's not included in the choices. So I picked the closest one to it. Onoda Ruki is just your ordinary high school student. He strived for being the Classmate A who's unimportant to the story. Despite being the Classmate A. Onoda has a secret desire which he always had ever since young and that was to steal each and every girl from their guy. Join him as he entered his high school days as he conquer and steal every girl he sets his eyes on. And along the way, the growth in his character and those around him. TAGS: Netori, Romance, R-18, Harem, School Life Discord Invite: BWBWUrU Support me on Patreon: /dyrem *I do not own the cover photo. I will take it out if requested. *DISCLAIMER This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, places, and events are products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious way. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Moreover, the ages of the characters appearing in this fiction are 18 and above.

Dyrem · Urban
4.5
2541 Chs

Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

A 20-years old boy transmigrated into the female-dominated novel world, But not as a protagonist nor as the main villain.  He transmigrated as the green tea boyfriend of the main female CEO heroine and will become the first target of the protagonist of this novel. Alex was scared for his life. In the novel, it's impossible to defeat the son of luck. When he was helpless, the golden finger exclusive for travelers came. [Ding! The Female Raider System is being loaded.] Alex was excited thinking that he doesn't need to go close to a high cold female CEO but the system tells him different things. [Ding! As long as the host raids the heroines and increases their affection, the Host will receive heaven-defying rewards.] So his journey as green tea/White lotus raiding began.  Ohh here is Discord Server Link : https://discord.com/invite/bCgvFWC3Ka (Photo is his, not mine. If the owner doesn't want it, I can remove it.)

ForManaga · Urban
3.8
392 Chs

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

BURN ME ALIVE IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THIS BOOK...AFTER READING THAT IS Regressing back in time after sacrificing his life for someone undeserving someone who didn’t even shed a tear after his death just total blank. The person he begged for love rejected him every single time. Now, he returns to when he was 18 again. Looking at her face, he wants to try again, to fall in love with her once more, to want to... but no, he no longer wants to feel that pain again. Some feelings never change, but you have to leave them behind, right? And one life should be enough to try. He made a commitment to never love her again. This life is his chance to live for himself. But who knew he wasn’t the only one regressed? The ultimate black heart curse is broken... and time reverses. Avey: “Lucy, can we.” Tears in her eyes. Lucy: Looking blankly at him. Avey: “Can’t you at least give me one chance?” Lucian: Silently looking at her. what about other people who hurt him too: mother, sister, friend and ofc her Will he give up on love for his own peace, or will he be too afraid to feel that pain again? --- Additional Tags: Regression, Time Travel, Yandere, CEO Girl, Mafia, Family Conflicts, Mother’s Failure, Revenge, Heartbreak, Sacrifices, Unworthy Love, Beautiful Love Story, Strong Characters, Loki ---

LazyDiablo · Urban
4.4
296 Chs

I Breathe Euro

Dropped, Dont Read after 180 Chapter's. [Ding !! Euro Breather System Unlocked]  [One breath = 1 euro]  [Level 1 : Please use  100,000 Euros to level up] As Jack made his way back to his small apartment from his part-time work, he couldn't help but be amazed by a panel that materialized before his eyes. Despite his best efforts to dismiss the idea of such imaginary thing, his thrifty side begged him to believe in it. Coming from Australia after obtaining a scholarship to attend a highly esteemed German high school. All he had was a life without parents. He may expect his life to undergo a radical transformation now that he got a cheat system. Join my discord : https://discord.gg/aDAUyXxqEd Disclaimer: This story is a work of fiction. All characters, events, and organizations are imaginary and any resemblance to real persons or events is purely coincidental. The narrative is intended for entertainment purposes only and does not reflect real-life occurrences or perspectives.

tiko_tiko · Urban
4.4
243 Chs

Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World

"I hate this world. I hate everyone. There's no justice for the weak," Once happy and carefree, Reign's life took a dark turn when he was kidnapped and undergone brutal experiments. These trials broke not only his physical body but also shattered his mind. In the end, his body couldn't withstand the ordeal, and he died like a pitiful lab rat. But death wasn't the end. He woke up in a new world as a corpse, armed with the Ultimate Mutation System. A system that enabled him to mutate and gain power in exchange for his own humanity. Determined to avoid being exploited again, he sets out to become a true powerhouse. He knew that being weak would only make him a target, especially now that he was a monster. "Kill or be killed." That was his only option.

InnocentFox · Urban
4.4
627 Chs

When the Doctor Uses A Hack

You're a struggling young doctor, barely making ends meet with a measly $2000 monthly income. Life's pressures and trials weigh heavily upon you! But lo and behold! One fine morning, you wake up to find yourself equipped with some sort of cheat codes... You're scheduled for an appendectomy, so you roll up your sleeves and get ready to explore the abdominal terrain: You touch the cecum: "Cecum: Healthy!" You palpate the colon: "Colon: All clear!" You reach the appendix: "Appendix: It's an inflamed, pus-filled appendix monster, level 15, rare creature. Recommendation: Perform an appendectomy!" With a decisive hand, you wield your scalpel and skillfully remove the troublesome appendix. "Ding! Rare appendix monster eliminated! Rewards: +100 experience in appendectomy, +$100, and a shiny white suture needle!" And thus, your journey begins as an emergency surgeon. But remember, with great healing powers comes great responsibility!

Holding an inch ruler · Urban
3.9
1197 Chs

Sponsor System: Harem With Infinite Money

[ Warning: Mature content R-18 ] ______________________________ [Ding! Matching is successful, the host obtains the sponsor system and starts the unlimited money mode.] [Ding! Please turn the bound female protagonist into your own simp. If the counterattack is successful, you will be rewarded with enhanced attribute points.] The system is possessed, and the loser's road to counterattack begins... ______________________________ [Things to be noted] 1. From the title, you should've guessed it already but let me tell you the story will be filled with many sexual adventures. So... you are welcome to enjoy them..... 2. However... don't expect MC to have sexual relations with every woman he meets. I'll be focusing on the story, and would 'Try' not to blindly throw sex scenes left and right. Important Note: If you enjoy the story then don't forget to vote your GTs, Power stones and also if you can, send some GIFTS too. This poor soul would appreciate it. Happy reading~ ________________

Artistic_Zombie · Urban
Not enough ratings
205 Chs
Login