Item: The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis
Rating: 4.4
Author: Water0202020

Water0202020Lv66yr

2018-08-24 11:20

I stake my god-like stellar reputation again to write a review. Do you want to see snu~snu on super beauties? Do you want hypnosis with different Sex scenes? Do you want mc to kill his enemies? Search no more. Constructive criticism: 1) naked thigh stockings in mature beauty with sexy thighs or in onee-chan characters😏. 2) diverse personalities other than yandere. 3) sexy foreign childhood female's cherry🙄😏 4) some ffm or fffm sandwich😏 5) Not abandoning or sharing his Sex slaves if they are super beautiful. But, girls like haruno and sakura's sister can die😈👿 6) no netorare/rase. Even with slaves....as long as they are not Bitches. 7) Onee-chan incessstttttt and her V-card😍 8) Not too dark/twisted personality. Atleast, he should not abandon his girls.

The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

Gyihhuhu_

4.1

24 Chs

Liked by 12 people

Replies6

TheGentlemenWorldLv10

Bruh... I can't believe I am going to say this but, get a life!

6yr

TheGentlemenWorldLv10

Guh, now that I come back after a while, this review creeps me the hell out.

TheGentlemenWorld:Bruh... I can't believe I am going to say this but, get a life!

6yr

Water0202020Lv6

As a gentleman, you have gotta understand the genre of the novel

TheGentlemenWorld:Guh, now that I come back after a while, this review creeps me the hell out.

6yr

TheGentlemenWorldLv10

I mean... I do understand the genre but, is there really a need to go so extreme? It's almost like you're a rabbit with no mate on mating season.

Water0202020:As a gentleman, you have gotta understand the genre of the novel

6yr

Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Oh hey. It’s you.

6yr

EroticEarwigLv13

Seems like a pretty good review for a smut novel. Outlines what's important (when people be looking for smut)

TheGentlemenWorld:Guh, now that I come back after a while, this review creeps me the hell out.

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