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HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv46yr
2018-08-21 12:58

Hypocrite mc. Author just keeps on going from one situation to another which involves abuse and rape everytime. The MC is getting more and more hypocritical and does one scene ever get completed? You have one story in one chapter and it jumps to another in another chapter. If the main topic is not revenge, which I think it is not then finish the revenge thing so we can move on from all the rape and abuse **** so that we can see what the **** he is actually going to do after the revenge is done. Don't just jump from a story to another. You should read trassford's trading club.

The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis

Gyihhuhu_
4.1
24 Chs

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Zeraphin
ZeraphinLv4

Why is my opinion so different from yours? Are you actually reading the story carefully? The things he does what you call hypocritical are under the influences of his heart demons, furthermore, why the **** are you getting triggered over abuse and rape? Killing people is like throwing popcorn on the streets to you but rape is bad? Man **** you!

6yr
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Zeraphin
ZeraphinLv4

I apologize for cursing you, I currently have a fever so I'm pretty moody right now.

6yr
HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4

Did I fucking say I **** like killing is ok and other **** is bad ? I am just saying you have abuse and rape **** in most of the chapter. Don't bring that killing people is bad and abuse and other **** mate. I am telling you not to jump from a story to another and just complete one story. Did you even read what I wrote? I ain't cursing you mate. The mc is a hypocrite that's what I trying to tell the people who don't enjoy the hypocrite type of mc. Just because the phrase killing is good and rape and other are bad exists doesn't mean you just randomly reply to every comment containing words like rape and abuse with the same phrase every time. You don't need to **** me, maybe you should be the one reading my comment. This is what my comments mean, don't try to change the meaning of my words just so you can reply with ****.

6yr
TheMDmaster11
TheMDmaster11Lv4

THE AUTHOR IS A HYPOCRITE JUST LIKE THE MC. DID THIS SHITTY AUTHOR EVEN READ THE DUDE'S COMMENT ? BITCH FUCK YOU' CAN'T EVEN TAKE SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. IT'S NOT LIKE HE WAS CURSING YOU BITCH. USE SOME FUCKING BRAINS AND READ THE SHIT BEFORE YOU COMMENT. EVEN THOUGH I MAY NOT AGREE ON ALL THE THINGS MOST OF THE THINGS HE WROTE ARE TURE.

6yr
Gyihhuhu_
Gyihhuhu_Author

Excuse me? I am not the dude who commented above (Zeraphin) so why are you calling me a hypocrite?

TheMDmaster11:THE AUTHOR IS A HYPOCRITE JUST LIKE THE MC. DID THIS SHITTY AUTHOR EVEN READ THE DUDE'S COMMENT ? BITCH FUCK YOU' CAN'T EVEN TAKE SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. IT'S NOT LIKE HE WAS CURSING YOU BITCH. USE SOME FUCKING BRAINS AND READ THE SHIT BEFORE YOU COMMENT. EVEN THOUGH I MAY NOT AGREE ON ALL THE THINGS MOST OF THE THINGS HE WROTE ARE TURE.
6yr
TheMDmaster11
TheMDmaster11Lv4

I ain't calling you ****. it's all to that Zeraphin guy

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