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Azrael4355
Azrael4355Lv66yr
2018-06-21 07:49

I really want to give this a higher review but i can't, simply because aside from the system everything the mc has was copied from other anime. Hence those guy's deserve that credit not our author. Now dont get me wrong i really enjoyed reading this book sadly i really recommend the author to start a real original book, why you might ask. Simple copyright infringement, you can't or ever will be able to publish this work unless you can secure permission from all those anime. Mr. Author you have a lot of potential so allow me to help you out. Read the following works of the author David Eddings: Belgariad Series Mallorean Series Belgarath the sorcerer Polgara the sorcerers The Rivan Codex Read those and it'll help you make a real original novel one you can publish and make some money on. I wish you luck bro but seriously make a real original you have skill don't waste it.

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senkii
senkiiLv6

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Yolo999
Yolo999Lv4

True...read Zombie King....original novel

Halt_Jagged
Halt_JaggedLv5

Hey, although your intentions do for a matter of fact seem to to be in the right place, although the origin of such and powers may come from other places . What really matters is how they are put to use, it could be seen as building a house(vaguely) although the tools may be borrowed, as long as it can contribute to a new mythos then it all works out in the end. As for turning this into a novel and breaking into the original ‘original’ scene, that can be left for later on when they’re more experienced.

Guest199
Guest199Lv4

Ehmm...he types like it is a really bad novel, but i only see the 'copy infringement' bullsheet in what he is typing about.

Halt_Jagged:Hey, although your intentions do for a matter of fact seem to to be in the right place, although the origin of such and powers may come from other places . What really matters is how they are put to use, it could be seen as building a house(vaguely) although the tools may be borrowed, as long as it can contribute to a new mythos then it all works out in the end. As for turning this into a novel and breaking into the original ‘original’ scene, that can be left for later on when they’re more experienced.
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

if you want to decrease rating of this novel because it uses stuff from other works what about rebirth of legendary guardian, where everything is from world of warcraft ? why does it have high rating? copying is not a good reason to give it low rating okay?

Karmapanda
KarmapandaLv3

It actually is. Maybe not in China though.. where copyrights are treated like dirt. But still it is a reason. Since a rating is just a gathering of opinion.. you can't is just like saying.. you don't have a right to your opinion. It's his criteria not yours that's important for his vote.

Earthshaker34:if you want to decrease rating of this novel because it uses stuff from other works what about rebirth of legendary guardian, where everything is from world of warcraft ? why does it have high rating? copying is not a good reason to give it low rating okay?
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

i said that considering there are novels which have pretty high rating who copy stuff from already existing works using such a reason to give an original work from an author who is trying his talent at writing is not a good reason after all if you are just trying to get a feel of writing your imagination and what not will be influenced by the works you have witnessed! be it cultivation novels,games,movies or what not.

Karmapanda:It actually is. Maybe not in China though.. where copyrights are treated like dirt. But still it is a reason. Since a rating is just a gathering of opinion.. you can't is just like saying.. you don't have a right to your opinion. It's his criteria not yours that's important for his vote.
Karmapanda
KarmapandaLv3

I disagree. In China it's not a good enough reason but I. Europe or America it would be. Anywhere with serious issues about copyrights. It's something to do with taste. Taste can be the image but also the flavour something leaves. Commenter attacked the image. That's a good reason in Western areas.

Earthshaker34:i said that considering there are novels which have pretty high rating who copy stuff from already existing works using such a reason to give an original work from an author who is trying his talent at writing is not a good reason after all if you are just trying to get a feel of writing your imagination and what not will be influenced by the works you have witnessed! be it cultivation novels,games,movies or what not.
mrpixeltech
mrpixeltechLv13

His words as an expression of his opinion are obviously his own. However, the rating itself, is guided based on specific criteria. If you're playing by the rules, you rate the novels based on the criteria specified, not on one's views on plagiarism vs fair-use.

Karmapanda:It actually is. Maybe not in China though.. where copyrights are treated like dirt. But still it is a reason. Since a rating is just a gathering of opinion.. you can't is just like saying.. you don't have a right to your opinion. It's his criteria not yours that's important for his vote.
reader001
reader001Lv14

Actually, it could be counted as a negative in the world building criteria.

mrpixeltech:His words as an expression of his opinion are obviously his own. However, the rating itself, is guided based on specific criteria. If you're playing by the rules, you rate the novels based on the criteria specified, not on one's views on plagiarism vs fair-use.
Karmapanda
KarmapandaLv3

Not true. There are different categories, he posted in general. So there is only one rule: your opinion why or why didn't you like it. It's OPINION, not specific criteria.

mrpixeltech:His words as an expression of his opinion are obviously his own. However, the rating itself, is guided based on specific criteria. If you're playing by the rules, you rate the novels based on the criteria specified, not on one's views on plagiarism vs fair-use.
Wolfytopia
WolfytopiaLv6

Rating is pure opinion and a good book means the right target audience and timing, the so called "specific criteria" changes all the time so even if there was one it has already changed.

Azrael4355
Azrael4355Lv6

I guess plagarism is pure opinion now huh 😂 good one kid. Glad your parents didn't wasted their money sending you to school hahahahaha

Wolfytopia:Rating is pure opinion and a good book means the right target audience and timing, the so called "specific criteria" changes all the time so even if there was one it has already changed.
Wolfytopia
WolfytopiaLv6

I don't recall saying anything about plagiarism being pure opinion, you are inferring something that is not there. Plagiarism is a problem but borrowing ideas is not.

Azrael4355:I guess plagarism is pure opinion now huh 😂 good one kid. Glad your parents didn't wasted their money sending you to school hahahahaha
Azrael4355
Azrael4355Lv6

Semantics kid😉 try again later 😂

Wolfytopia:I don't recall saying anything about plagiarism being pure opinion, you are inferring something that is not there. Plagiarism is a problem but borrowing ideas is not.
glo_antttt
glo_anttttLv15

i live in america and i have no problem with this novel even though i don't like it much, your just being the hero !!

Karmapanda:I disagree. In China it's not a good enough reason but I. Europe or America it would be. Anywhere with serious issues about copyrights. It's something to do with taste. Taste can be the image but also the flavour something leaves. Commenter attacked the image. That's a good reason in Western areas.
slceapp
slceappLv4

Just wanted to say that yes the author wasn't being creative when it came to creating his own "skills" in his WN but essentially, every Novels in this type of genre from professionals or new authors, they copy off from one another. Martial Arts Skills, Sword Type skill set, elemental type skill set, being reborn/reincarnated, being able to use Qi / Ki / Magic, etc etc. What this author did was pretty much created a MC that lived in our current modern age and was transported to another world and since the MC pretty much lived in our current type of world where Anime existed, the MC created skills using what he remembers from anime. This isn't plagiarism or anything like that as the author didn't write it like it was his own idea. The MC pretty states that he was creating skills from anime in his previous world. The author used existing stuff to his own originality.

Azrael4355
Azrael4355Lv6

Again semantics 😂 plagarism no matter how you spin it around is at the end of the day is plagarism. Try to get this published 😂 😆😉

slceapp:Just wanted to say that yes the author wasn't being creative when it came to creating his own "skills" in his WN but essentially, every Novels in this type of genre from professionals or new authors, they copy off from one another. Martial Arts Skills, Sword Type skill set, elemental type skill set, being reborn/reincarnated, being able to use Qi / Ki / Magic, etc etc. What this author did was pretty much created a MC that lived in our current modern age and was transported to another world and since the MC pretty much lived in our current type of world where Anime existed, the MC created skills using what he remembers from anime. This isn't plagiarism or anything like that as the author didn't write it like it was his own idea. The MC pretty states that he was creating skills from anime in his previous world. The author used existing stuff to his own originality.
slceapp
slceappLv4

I was assuming the author and anyone else writing original novels on this website wasn't doing it to get published. If the author is looking to get published then yes, I agree with you about the plagiarism but if the author is writing stuff and posting them here for fun to showcase a story they wanted to write for all to read, the author is doing a great job.

Azrael4355:Again semantics 😂 plagarism no matter how you spin it around is at the end of the day is plagarism. Try to get this published 😂 😆😉
Azrael4355
Azrael4355Lv6

You do know they get paid right 😂 that in essence alone already makes what they are doing a felony charge hehehe. Soon as money was added that " FOR FUN" went out the window 😂

slceapp:I was assuming the author and anyone else writing original novels on this website wasn't doing it to get published. If the author is looking to get published then yes, I agree with you about the plagiarism but if the author is writing stuff and posting them here for fun to showcase a story they wanted to write for all to read, the author is doing a great job.
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MinRan
MinRanLv5

I can't... The story is not so bad but it still has many flaws. However my biggest problems here are that the MC is retarded and that there are too many inconsistencies. MC is retarded : - MC keep wasting tickets (a form of unique currency that can be used to buy and upgrade skills) on weapons and armors when he's the first born prince of a great nation. - MC doesn't try to scan any of the weapons won in the gatcha to know their quality/rarity. - MC doesn't try to recycle any of the useless weapons/armors he got - MC forgot he was supposed to be crippled and blows is cover, but that's fine because no one question it - MC's stats increases when his level increases and the MC doesn't try to understand the logic behind it. By how much does the intelligence stat increases when the MC level up ? What changes when it does ? What does defense really do ? How much is +1 in strength ? We don't know, and the MC doesn't care. - Soul contracts between a monster and a contractor means that if one dies the other dies as well. Is it the same with monsters won in the gatcha ? We don't know, and the MC doesn't care and doesn't ask before drawing for a monster. Imagine the MC being saddled with a useless bunny and forced to waste tickets on it to avoid dying because his bunny was killed by a common fox or simply died from old age. Inconsistencies : - MC can use Kunai and Shuriken without having used them before and without any skill related to them. - Upgrading a one-sword fighting style gives you a two-swords fighting style instead of a more powerful one-sword style. Which means that fighting with two-swords is considered better than fighting with one when we know it's not true at all. I guess upgrading a shield+sword fighting style would give you a two-shields + two-swords fighting style then. - The system makes the distinction between abilities (active) and skills (passive) but only offers a gatcha for skills without any explanation from the system or question from the MC. - This world has Qi/Mana but the MC has no stat related to it, he can however still use skills that need Qi/Mana - Haggling "successfully reduce the price of items by 2%". What does that means ?! We are in a real world not gouverned by any system here ! So if the MC start haggling for a sword worth 6 gold, the shopkeeper will automatically sell it for exactly 2% less ? What ?! - Haggling (used by everyone everyday) is rarer than Etiquette (used by nobles) and as rare as Sharingan and Spectral Shadow Steps. Next : Kamehameha is uncommon and handshake is rare ! - Levels don't means sh*t ! I could continue (I really could and I only read the first 16 chapters !) but I can't be bothered.

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