Item: Fantasy System
Rating: 4.4
Author: Nimish_Gupta

Nimish_GuptaLv46yr

2018-05-29 03:15

Good novel like to read more but ch2 and 1 are same so change that , you gave him sharigan will you give rinnegan also if so that will be awesome ,if possible get him a lover or a wife and give her the subsystem so they can get stronger together and make him op all of a sudden before getting a wife for him .Man I have a ton of ideas and also have high expectations from this novel and a small request that it to increase the rate of release and NO MATTERS WHAT DO NOT KILL OR SEPARATE HIM AND HIS WIFE.

Fantasy System

Shigun

4.2

299 Chs

Liked by 10 people

Replies14

TehizzLv4

Defo kill the wife.

6yr

DaoistForgetsAlotLv5

*spoiler* what’s the point if he is going out there saving every girl he meets, that’s basically the foundation for most harems

6yr

TuffmanLv3

Fuck romance! No such thing should exist in this novel.

6yr

FeiloLv5

no romance that stuff is lame

6yr

DaoistForgetsAlotLv5

for me romance is okay but only if one girl and the qualties she needs to have=- -Needs same rank/cultivation/strength as mc or higher or 1 rank/cultivation/strength lower -not be overly dependent on mc -not a fragile heart and not be bossy with mc

6yr

DaoistForgetsAlotLv5

only one girl and not higher plus mc has to be loyal with her and no cheating on her

6yr

GuYueFangZhengLv10

Sadly the answer has been given...

Feilo:no romance that stuff is lame

6yr

FeiloLv5

aww man

GuYueFangZheng:Sadly the answer has been given...

6yr

CliffkunLolRektLv6

pls two girls for mc I only read harem novels if there is two I can read it cus its a semi harem lol

DaoistForgetsAlot:for me romance is okay but only if one girl and the qualties she needs to have=- -Needs same rank/cultivation/strength as mc or higher or 1 rank/cultivation/strength lower -not be overly dependent on mc -not a fragile heart and not be bossy with mc

6yr

Someone13Lv5

1 rank weaker than him is still to strong so they would way stronger than him unless they are a transmigrater or reincarnated like him... Actually, there might be later on.

6yr

infinitivi1Lv5

Well for the female protagonist I suggest a personality combine of. The ***iness and playfulness of Rias Gremory from highschool DxD. The assertiveness of Erika Blandelli from Champione! And the gentleness and supportive role of hinata from naruto shippuden

6yr

KnossosLv4

Did you have a brain aneurysm whilst typing this?

6yr

IgrisKunLv11

u dont need romance in every book theres much more lame books out there like that

3yr

DogfonosLv12

no please dont

2yr

Other Reviews

ShigunAuthor

Hello everyone, your author here. My humble self couldn't help but give myself a perfect score on the novel hahahhaha. I hope you enjoy my novel and i welcome your feedback on how it should be improved!

6yr

Azrael4355Lv6

I really want to give this a higher review but i can't, simply because aside from the system everything the mc has was copied from other anime. Hence those guy's deserve that credit not our author. Now dont get me wrong i really enjoyed reading this book sadly i really recommend the author to start a real original book, why you might ask. Simple copyright infringement, you can't or ever will be able to publish this work unless you can secure permission from all those anime. Mr. Author you have a lot of potential so allow me to help you out. Read the following works of the author David Eddings: Belgariad Series Mallorean Series Belgarath the sorcerer Polgara the sorcerers The Rivan Codex Read those and it'll help you make a real original novel one you can publish and make some money on. I wish you luck bro but seriously make a real original you have skill don't waste it.

6yr

MinRanLv5

I can't... The story is not so bad but it still has many flaws. However my biggest problems here are that the MC is retarded and that there are too many inconsistencies. MC is retarded : - MC keep wasting tickets (a form of unique currency that can be used to buy and upgrade skills) on weapons and armors when he's the first born prince of a great nation. - MC doesn't try to scan any of the weapons won in the gatcha to know their quality/rarity. - MC doesn't try to recycle any of the useless weapons/armors he got - MC forgot he was supposed to be crippled and blows is cover, but that's fine because no one question it - MC's stats increases when his level increases and the MC doesn't try to understand the logic behind it. By how much does the intelligence stat increases when the MC level up ? What changes when it does ? What does defense really do ? How much is +1 in strength ? We don't know, and the MC doesn't care. - Soul contracts between a monster and a contractor means that if one dies the other dies as well. Is it the same with monsters won in the gatcha ? We don't know, and the MC doesn't care and doesn't ask before drawing for a monster. Imagine the MC being saddled with a useless bunny and forced to waste tickets on it to avoid dying because his bunny was killed by a common fox or simply died from old age. Inconsistencies : - MC can use Kunai and Shuriken without having used them before and without any skill related to them. - Upgrading a one-sword fighting style gives you a two-swords fighting style instead of a more powerful one-sword style. Which means that fighting with two-swords is considered better than fighting with one when we know it's not true at all. I guess upgrading a shield+sword fighting style would give you a two-shields + two-swords fighting style then. - The system makes the distinction between abilities (active) and skills (passive) but only offers a gatcha for skills without any explanation from the system or question from the MC. - This world has Qi/Mana but the MC has no stat related to it, he can however still use skills that need Qi/Mana - Haggling "successfully reduce the price of items by 2%". What does that means ?! We are in a real world not gouverned by any system here ! So if the MC start haggling for a sword worth 6 gold, the shopkeeper will automatically sell it for exactly 2% less ? What ?! - Haggling (used by everyone everyday) is rarer than Etiquette (used by nobles) and as rare as Sharingan and Spectral Shadow Steps. Next : Kamehameha is uncommon and handshake is rare ! - Levels don't means sh*t ! I could continue (I really could and I only read the first 16 chapters !) but I can't be bothered.

6yr

UndeadSageLv5

HURRY UP AND GIVE THIS WB ALL YOUR POWER STONES.. our fellow reader has done an awesome job, we gotta show him our support.... to TL: the academy part is getting a little dull pls fix it, GODSPEED.

6yr

NawaabzadahLv5

Story is interesting but overall it's quality isn't good. Word arrangement is not good. It feels like written by fifth grade student who's English is not good. Lines are broken. There's no rhythm in story lines.

6yr

Peak_Plot_ArmourLv14

Reveal spoiler

6yr

pajaLv14

Story development I've just read first 20 chapters, i have no idea whats going on. Only system and no story at all (i want to be stronger) and 2 chapters plot. Its just dont make sense. Character- have no idea i know that he is handsome. Wooden character. I dont know anything about the world- 1 sect 1 city 1 country. Chapters are like " Today lets do that" and nothing else, characters are stupid or blind ( from criple to fighting with king in 4 days!) Noboty finds that weird. One of the worst that ive read but yeah idea is nice. Just poor writing.

6yr

ImraelLv5

I am now at Chapter 70 hear my advice unless you're stupid and the missing a lot of brain cells don't read the story I literally mean it otherwise you'll start losing your brain cells.

6yr

DaoistmmLv10

Reveal spoiler

6yr

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