So to start out with I’m a bit burned out on this type of novel just coz they're all the same and not much change. And that’s where this one improves, changes does something right which is Character Growth. You don’t see it often really often or I’ll be that the MC devolves into some dick. The author has a really good grasp of character growth and I can’t wait for more. The chapter read nice and easy and there is a good flow to them. Will review again after more is out but for the time being I enjoy it. Check it out yourself

Hi author here :) This is something I wrote to get out of my writers block while writing adopted soldier. So I don't know if it's going to be good but I'll try.

The problem with this story is its characters are unappealing. The character development is done by showing scenes where the MC is taking action. But he makes actions with little sense behind them that just make you feel like he's an immature sociopath. Rather than being an indomitable demon king reborn he is an impulsive little ****. All the other characters are paper thin.

We don't know much about the world the MC is in. Instead we know that the MC has some kind of bromance with his hero friend. His friend is very annoying and I don't understand why the MC would deal with his crap. Isn't the MC suppose to be a Demon King? You kept saying he is so strong on par with S ranks, but he runs away from a elder lich even though he killed a king drake. Then we have Hilda who is the worst companion you could've gave the MC. You didn't even try to make her likable for the readers and now we're stuck with the MC dealing with her crappy attitude. But the thing I dislike the most in this story is how you've made his sword spirit into some kind of long lost friend. That they met in a previous life 'eons' ago and now the sword spirit is trying to rekindle their relationship even though the MC doesn't have memories of her. I feel like you're trying to hard to make a 'cool' MC and forgot to make realistic developments. I suggest you should amend these things by going back and focusing on one thing at a time. Because right now you have the hero school arc, underworld arc and adventurer arc all mashed together into a mess. Instead plot out these arcs one at a time and finish them with out worrying about the other arcs. After which you'll have an easier time interconnecting these timelines together for a smoother read. Giving the characters proper time to develop. I do hope you'll take my advice and make some changes later on.

This Book has a bright future and look forward to what is to come in this new author for thise looking for a interesting plot and a set of characters that you come to like i highly recommend this novel

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Literal trash, seriously the amount of times I question how the f*ck is this even rated so high when at the start he gets destroyed just by blocking his mana, are you f*cking kidding me?, Strongest? MORE LIKE SHITTIEST, and how come he gets destroyed so easily at the beginning? at the very least, make it so that he dies after fighting 100 heroes so it make it look like he's the strongest, not by getting so easily tricked holy sh*t. Next is the amount of antagonists, every single fucking one of them is retarded with dick for a brain, and you though CN Novels young master are annoying? WELL EVERY SINGLE FUCKING SIDE CHARACTER HERE IS TRASH. All I can say don't even bother trying to read this, I read so many CN novels that have lower rating but still be readable but this? this trash? DON'T since your brain cells might just kill themselves for seeing this ****.

In the beginning, the story isn't too different from the general standard. Old works rehashed into something somewhat new and workable. However, that is one of the good things so far about this story. Unlike most stories that blindly throw out an old theme and jump into the story they really want to write—as if they couldn't think up an original opening of their own—this story comes off more like it was inspired to be this way. It's worth sinking your teeth into and has a couple of moments to laugh at fairly early on. Overall: Reincarnation - check. Demon Lord - check. Hero cheat system - check Dungeons & Dungeon Cores - check Female sidekicks for Male Leads - check Simple yet Good Foreshadowing - check Same old story — No! I've read what's available so far and I am not disappointed. If the author maintains this level of story preogression and interest, it should be worth reading for a long time to come. If I have one complaint about this story, it is the fact that these kind of stories are the ones most likely to be dropped. I've rarely seen an ending to stories with similar themes and formats. Usually, the story progresses without a foreseeable end until it is eventually canceled, dropped, abandoned or gets too ridiculous and the readers disappear. Hope this one makes it to the end.