Literal trash, seriously the amount of times I question how the f*ck is this even rated so high when at the start he gets destroyed just by blocking his mana, are you f*cking kidding me?, Strongest? MORE LIKE SHITTIEST, and how come he gets destroyed so easily at the beginning? at the very least, make it so that he dies after fighting 100 heroes so it make it look like he's the strongest, not by getting so easily tricked holy sh*t. Next is the amount of antagonists, every single fucking one of them is retarded with dick for a brain, and you though CN Novels young master are annoying? WELL EVERY SINGLE FUCKING SIDE CHARACTER HERE IS TRASH. All I can say don't even bother trying to read this, I read so many CN novels that have lower rating but still be readable but this? this trash? DON'T since your brain cells might just kill themselves for seeing this ****.
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Well first off thanks for reading my work even though you didn't like it. So I just want to say that the death in the beginning was something the mc wanted to happen, he was already bored of it all. He was happy to die in battle than rotting away doing nothing. As for the other things that depends on the preference of the reader. Though I do value your opinion, please don't write it in a way that makes it feel like you're shouting. No need to get so mad like you're fighting someone.
Sorry, well not really since I'm honest and frank with my words, though I seriously question the difference between Adopted Soldier and this when one is well-written one while the other is not, the antagonist not annoying and well written, the character progression is pretty good, while this is just quite bad and there are some that are just plain cringe.
lynerparel:Well first off thanks for reading my work even though you didn't like it. So I just want to say that the death in the beginning was something the mc wanted to happen, he was already bored of it all. He was happy to die in battle than rotting away doing nothing. As for the other things that depends on the preference of the reader. Though I do value your opinion, please don't write it in a way that makes it feel like you're shouting. No need to get so mad like you're fighting someone.
Well, there are still people that like it, so calling it trash is not only insulting me but them as well. Of course, you're entitled to your own opinion which is of course good. But please don't just barrage me with hate cause it makes you look really angry. Also regarding the death at the first chapter, I reread it and still think it works, since, like superman and his kryptonite, a demon lord without mana is just a normal dude. Also like I said he really wanted to die. Well anyway like I said before, thanks for reading and sorry that you didn't like it. Also, this novel is going to be way longer than A.S so there are going to be a ton of characters, and most of them won't have the progression you want since I can't write all that. Well, this reply took longer to write than I expected, once again I thank you, my friend, for sharing your opinion, just hope you don't write it full of anger next time.
Minokyuu:Sorry, well not really since I'm honest and frank with my words, though I seriously question the difference between Adopted Soldier and this when one is well-written one while the other is not, the antagonist not annoying and well written, the character progression is pretty good, while this is just quite bad and there are some that are just plain cringe.
Also, you read A.S? Never notice you in the comment section. If you did read it thank you for reading that as well. :)
Minokyuu:Sorry, well not really since I'm honest and frank with my words, though I seriously question the difference between Adopted Soldier and this when one is well-written one while the other is not, the antagonist not annoying and well written, the character progression is pretty good, while this is just quite bad and there are some that are just plain cringe.
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lynerparel:Well, there are still people that like it, so calling it trash is not only insulting me but them as well. Of course, you're entitled to your own opinion which is of course good. But please don't just barrage me with hate cause it makes you look really angry. Also regarding the death at the first chapter, I reread it and still think it works, since, like superman and his kryptonite, a demon lord without mana is just a normal dude. Also like I said he really wanted to die. Well anyway like I said before, thanks for reading and sorry that you didn't like it. Also, this novel is going to be way longer than A.S so there are going to be a ton of characters, and most of them won't have the progression you want since I can't write all that. Well, this reply took longer to write than I expected, once again I thank you, my friend, for sharing your opinion, just hope you don't write it full of anger next time.
I don't really think that this is a good way to review. I think it was a great story and MC was one of the best I've read. Mana was Kretos's strong suit and he might've relied on it too much. As mentioned, the Strongest Mortal Soul was relatively weak at the moment, but it still took a Mana-nulling pill and the strength of the strongest of all the races combined to take him down. As the author mentioned, he was also tired and wanted to get this over with. In regards to your other parts, I've tried to write my own story and it's pretty hard. To create such a masterpiece that you've worked so long and hard for would hurt a lot if someone disliked it and spit on it. I'm sure a lot of people including my friends would want to read this story. If you didn't like the story, you should've just moved onto something else instead of staying and venting out your anger.
