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Exlor
ExlorAuthor6yr
2018-05-16 17:37

Hello, this is the author of The Mech Touch, and I'll shamelessly review my own story to provide some clarification. This novel is my original work and I'm writing it as I go. My goal is to write a webnovel with the consistency and quality of Qidian's mainstay stories. This means that I will do my utmost to keep up a regular updating schedule and upload chapters with decent word counts without detrimentally affecting its quality. I have a decade-long history of writing fanfiction and have published about 800,000 words in a dozen different stories, so I'm an old hand at this. I know more than almost anyone else what readers demand from authors, so I will work hard to meet your expectations. The Mech Touch is a story that I came up with a whim, but found it good enough to start writing immediately. I wanted to write an engaging sci-fi mech novel but from an original premise. Incorporating a 'System' into the story might be a cheap and overused plot element, but its fun and it works for the audience of this website.

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NovelNewbie354
NovelNewbie354Lv5

Got it I'll add to bookmark

Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13

I doubt your skin is as thick as mine

GRoy
GRoyLv13

c'mon. more ch! i already said that this novel is a undiscovered gem. only with more ch released we can make it shine. you have my vote, all the rest is up to you.

Lucasestevescosta
LucasestevescostaLv5

The story is very good. Good job! By the way, where do you get the inspiration for this story? I myself love mechs and always look for games, animes and others things related to mechs.

Exlor
ExlorAuthor

You should check out Battletech on Steam. That's my main inspiration.

Lucasestevescosta:The story is very good. Good job! By the way, where do you get the inspiration for this story? I myself love mechs and always look for games, animes and others things related to mechs.
Lucasestevescosta
LucasestevescostaLv5

Oh thanks for replying. I saw that game but my hardware is not good enough for It. Thanks for the tip! And continue your good work. My power stones are yours! You deserved it.

Exlor:You should check out Battletech on Steam. That's my main inspiration.
Exlor
ExlorAuthor

If your computer is that slow you can try the MechCommander games released in the early 2000s. There's also the older MechWarrior games that run on slow PCs as well.

Lucasestevescosta:Oh thanks for replying. I saw that game but my hardware is not good enough for It. Thanks for the tip! And continue your good work. My power stones are yours! You deserved it.
Lucasestevescosta
LucasestevescostaLv5

Mechcommander i didn't know, but the Mechwarrior series i have player. Very good.

Exlor:If your computer is that slow you can try the MechCommander games released in the early 2000s. There's also the older MechWarrior games that run on slow PCs as well.
NeAg
NeAgLv5

I know that he is a mech designer but will he pilot his own mech in the future? because I like the fighting scenes but it is either not detailed or long enough.

Dark_Xavy
Dark_XavyLv5

Is there some romantic sub-plot/harem in this story??

ExtremePrejudice
ExtremePrejudiceLv6

keep up the Great Work

ThickAsACityWall
ThickAsACityWallLv3

He can't pilot them. He doesn't have the aptitude, unless he can improve it through the system in the future.

NeAg:I know that he is a mech designer but will he pilot his own mech in the future? because I like the fighting scenes but it is either not detailed or long enough.
NeAg
NeAgLv5

Yeah I am hoping he will be able to create a mech for his on use despite the lack of aptitude. Afterall, there are special skills that needs to be unlocked manually through the system.

ThickAsACityWall:He can't pilot them. He doesn't have the aptitude, unless he can improve it through the system in the future.
RynMcNuts
RynMcNutsLv14

i'am a huge fan of mecha, and i hope i will not be dissapointed by this LN

Jetstorm
JetstormLv6

What's the release rate and is it consistent?

void893
void893Lv11

I like the idea and your motivations :) It seems I will enjoy this novel. Thank you for this interesting piece.

HobbyistReader
HobbyistReaderLv12

keep up the good work! it's nice to have a "crafter" MC for once - you have my vote ;)

Serenity_Zero
Serenity_ZeroLv5

hopefully you will continue your good work :) looking forward

KingKitten
KingKittenLv14

Is there romance or at least a few passerbys l?

getrama
getramaLv5

Hmm... Another system base story, shameless indeed ;v Good luck then

Other Reviews
chromaticleaf
chromaticleafLv15

I rather enjoy this story. Its more of a slow burn in terms of pacing, which can understandably be a bit frustrating. I'm actually not a super big fan of the actiony bits where Ves gets personally involved, but I understand their importance within the context of the story. I started reading this story because I was looking for something a bit more relaxed compared to the normal fare that I read. The MC often has many conflicting goals so it often feels like he's dragging his feet a bit, but I don't necessarily think that's a bad thing. I don't believe its ever been stated that Ves is a super driven person, so bouts of procrastination aren't uncommon and serve to make him seem more realistic. I don't think said dragging of feet has ever been particularly egregious, but at the same time I binged 350+ of the chapters at once so my perspective may be a bit skewed as a result. Since I've caught up to the most recent chapters, the story's been updating at a pace of two per day, so I think the updating pace is pretty stable. I think the supporting cast is fine, but the story is definitely very focused on Ves himself. We know the names of other characters and a bit of their backstories/motivations, but we don't go super in depth about them. I would say this is an area that could be improved upon, but not something that really detracts from the overall quality of the story itself. As for the World Background, we've been given glimpses into the universe as a whole outside of the small bubble the story's been primarily focused on. As a result, we know there is a greater universe with other planets/characters/aliens out there waiting to be explored. From my recollection, I don't believe there's been too many lore dumps. As things become relevant, Ves (and we as readers) learn more about them, but never really to a truly overwhelming extent. All in all, I think this is a fun story that's trying to be a bit different from the normal fare on this site. From that context, I believe the story I've given is fair. There's room for improvement, but nothing that detracts significantly from its overall quality. I think if you enjoy Superstars of Tomorrow this will be something you might enjoy as well.

BourneShadow
BourneShadowLv15

*I have read every single chapter up to 1736, skipping and skimming nothing* Slight inclusion of very mild spoilers that mean nothing out of context )) First, I have to say that the critics of the Vandal arc aren’t wrong. When I first read about the conscription, I assumed a time skip would be employed at some point. When they arrived at the Aeon corona system, I assumed time would be sped up on the planet rather than slowing down- this seemed like a great chance to accelerate the war ark. Nevertheless, the MC grew a lot during the arc. It is a bit of a stretch, but this is shaping up to be a 5000 chapter story at this rate. Dedicating 600+ chapters to preliminarily shape the MCs character from a timid indoctrinated weakling into a prototype of a business leader able to survive in a cutthroat world has at least some merit. Before you discount me completely- yes, I agree, there was some ‘false advertisement’. Being disconnected from the system for so long was counter to what most system novels do and many fellow readers will be justifiably annoyed at that. Me? I have no issue. Whilst I love your standard system trope chewing gum novels as much as the next guy sometimes, this isn’t that. In one of the recent chapters, the author described serving in the army as a means, not an end. That is the same thing I have to say for my perspective on his usage of the system. Whilst I cannot speak for the author, what I see from his work is an amalgamation. In mech touch speak, the design seed of the novel has taken fractured spiritual pieces from many different genres and used them to craft its own unique identity. Many people comment about the novel not conforming to expectations from various genres. Well... why should it? In webnovel speak, why continue to define a story by the same tags it started with if the story has come to a point where they are no longer the best choice? What if Ves loses the Metal Scroll for good? I’m sure the readers will riot(I’m sure the thought of introducing this plot element gives the author a headache for this reason) , but my point is that what if it makes the story better for it? Unlike so many people saying how the story has deteriorated, I have actually read the whole thing word for word. Whilst I agree that there were times where I was weary with parts of the story, I have never been disappointed. When ves returns from war, the Story picks up and becomes so much more phenomenal. The start of the new mech generation and his new mechs with their expanding repertoire of abilities are increasingly interesting to read about Tbh,I really tip my hat to the author. Perhaps the difference between phase tech mechs and mastercraft mechs are a subtle jibe at the non conformity of this story to cookie cutter ideologies. I’m sure any mildly intelligent person can think up 100 arguments against anything they wish. ‘Mech designers are unstable, hence justifying the MC making retarded decisions that help the plot’ I’ll take that excuse at face value. Why not? It makes for an interesting plot point. ‘the novel is so much about business but the business aspect isn’t realistic’ I’m entertained reading about it. I’m not a business magnate myself, nor do I expect the author to be too perfect? ‘What’s with cultivation? Why doesn’t it work like this or like that?’ Spirituality is obscure. Can the author make it more obvious? Does a massive pirate ship full of spirituality users not hammer home the point that only the strongest organisations really use it? Whilst Ves always calls it his unique advantage, there have been many hints in the story that he is well aware that he is not unique. He is aware that he is reinventing the wheel in some areas. He chooses not to think about that because it is not helpful to him. Many things are inherently open to debate. The author is building a universe. Where’s the fun if it’s perfect? I encourage fellow readers to read everything. This story is worth it. Enjoy!!

SnoopS
SnoopSLv5

The Mech Touch is one of the best original novel in this site, sadly it was become worst and worst. The story itself is interesting, the writing is a solid one, it is one of the best writing quality I have ever seen in original novel. So whats the problem? At first the story progress is slow but detailed about the MC, it was understandable as the author try to paint the world around MC. But what happen if that keep happening for 500 chapter? Then you got slow, full of bs and useless story or filler you may call. The story development become more and more slow, and you got a turtle pace story. Mob character get so much attention for 10-30 chapter and then disappear as they either dead, or become useless for the MC. Then you may think, why dont the author cut the filler, focus on the MC and stop making the story longer and longer than necessary? My answer, greed, the author is full of greed for your SS. Not it is wrong, not my problem, my problem is the time you wasted reading this useless filler story that got little to no impact to the MC and core story! You hope the story progress but for 3 days or 6 chapter and more it still stuck to that one battle with almost no relation to the MC, author keep making detailed BS of this mob character A who killed mob character B, C, D, E, F and so on so on. And it was not the first time he do it! While he keep making this BS nobody care, the character building become abandoned, many important side character got little to no story, and a mob character got more than 10 chapter, "u mad bro?" Another problem of this "detailed filler" is it wasnt even that interesting or correct enough, the chain command in the military is so bad and stupid the MC's country should be destroyed long ago. The mob character got to many explanation, you start to think maybe he become the next side chara, and then bam, no word anymore. Another time there is a filler full of mech battle, wait not that kind of mech battle, I mean what pilot in mech battle think in the fight, it wasnt even that interesting or important, and it got so many explanation! Like the reader care about that kind of BS! The author only want to increase word count like greedy chinese webnovel author, so he got more SS. Author build so many background BS, the story become so full of background story that got no explanation or attention for a long long long time! And he keeps adding more! The MC unfinished problem at chapter is maybe 1 or 2, but at chapter 500 he got 10 or more. There is no focus in the story, author is not just greedy about SS, but greedy about all kind of story development. It become to chaotic because of all the filler! This novel is a HONEY TRAP! It have excellent writing, but chaotic story development. You may read and think how good the story is at first, but as you go, and read far above 200 chapter, it become snail pace and full of filler. The problem is it was very subtle, and when you realize it you already read far to many chapter, therefore a honey trap, it was a good story until you realize it is a trash. Dont believe me? Read it yourself! Waste you time, I dont care. I only rant here because the author never read comment.

IraDiaboli
IraDiaboliLv15
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