Good story. caveat being it's ruined by a weird, arrogant mc who has too much handed to him on a platter. Creeping hunger for a goldfinger was insane much less how redundant it is immediately made. Author is clearly new to writing but capable of good plotlines and executing them. Struggles however with believable character settings, interactions and writing a likeable mc. I think I can look forward to reading your work in a couple years author.
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I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.
Hope is the only thing you can have on this…
_oinkchan:I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.
Truly
Kapuchinik:Hope is the only thing you can have on this…
Dude! It was brutal ☠️
Kapuchinik:Hope is the only thing you can have on this…
If your writing skill improved greatly u can consider writing novels on royalroad.its where good novel are written unlike wn.u also would't get 1 star review just because ur mc a girl or any stupid reason like on wn.most review are quit fair and really good.it show that the reviewer actually read and try to understand the story
_oinkchan:I'm not that new to writing 💀. In a few years, I hope not to write for incels on wn.
Thank you
Unknown_Stranger22:If your writing skill improved greatly u can consider writing novels on royalroad.its where good novel are written unlike wn.u also would't get 1 star review just because ur mc a girl or any stupid reason like on wn.most review are quit fair and really good.it show that the reviewer actually read and try to understand the story
