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Trapped in Time

Autor: RenuKakkar
Sci-fi Romance
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What is Trapped in Time

Leia o romance Trapped in Time escrito pelo autor RenuKakkar publicado no WebNovel. What would happen if you got stuck in Time?Zia has completed her Ph.D. in Botany and has applied for the post of lecturer/ Professor. She joins a High school as a temporary teacher and is entrusted wi...

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What would happen if you got stuck in Time? Zia has completed her Ph.D. in Botany and has applied for the post of lecturer/ Professor. She joins a High school as a temporary teacher and is entrusted with the task of leading a group of ten students on a trekking /camping expedition. On the way they meet a guy who seems to be a trouble maker but later, he proves to be a pillar of strength. Early morning their camp is attacked by Bears and they flee taking a different route. But they are lost. They enter a lost world where people are living, in hiding, for over 250 years. Their technology is much advanced as compared to ours. Their world is called ‘Utopia’ but now it is changing due to an oppressive ruler, meaning the ills of our world have manifested in Utopia too. They are trapped in the time of this hidden world and want to help the people there fight against the oppressive ruler and his cronies. The oppressive ruler wants to make a number of Time Machines by using the brains of the scientists who died in harness at the site of the experiments. They all decide to help the good citizens of ‘Utopia’ the lost world. The huge brains are destroyed and the Orbs of the scientists escape from the huge pulsating Brain to help them in their mission of destroying the Huge brains at other centers. In this process, the crystals that are used in the hypnotizing guns are almost finished and to get more they split up to go to the 'Magical World' through a curtain which is actually a portal. The Magical World is a flat man made Earth-like satellite, which was made as a joke to taunt the scientists 7000 years ago, and which is still operational. Here they meet the inhabitants. They are fascinated with the advancement of science especially the talking chips and the flying cars. They see a completely different world where animals, plants, rocks, water etc. can talk. Before you touch anything you need to seek permission. They also meet the Aliens called the 'Crocodile Race' who have come to the Magical World (the flat satellite) to get supplies. They see a spaceship being guided to land by the scientists of the Magical World. They also see the inside of the mountain where the controls are situated which help in maintaining the environment of the Magical World. They get an invite from the Aliens to visit ‘Titan’ the satellite of Saturn where the Crocodile race has settled. At present they are on the mother Ship going to Titan. **************************** Will try to post a chapter in a week now.

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Arcillaa01 · Fantasia
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Michelleukpeli · Geral
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Cockpit

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kykie Porcher · Urbano
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O Delegado 02

Davi Eu era tudo que ela precisava, seria seu melhor amigo, seu irmão, seu pai, seu namorado ou mesmo seu melhor marido. Desde o momento que conheci Rachel sabia que estava perdido por ela, ou melhor, estava caído por ela. Seu sorriso, seu olhar que me mostrava como ela era frágil, que nem uma pétala de flor. Ela nunca percebia mais seu olhar muito às vezes se traia e via que tinha alguma coisa que ela não me contaria nunca. Faria de tudo só pra ter o sorriso dela nos seus lábios em minha boca. Mesmo descobrindo que ela frequentava o mesmo clube de BDSM, que eu frequentava, será que a minha feiticeira era uma submissa? Raquel Sempre me imaginei, casada e vivendo felizes para sempre. Mas sabia que nunca mais iria acontecer comigo. Assistia filme, novela e sempre tinha o final daqueles que nós como expectadora gostaríamos de viver. E um dia vou ao clube de “BDSM” do qual eu frequento e encontro ninguém, mais e ninguém menos que Davi Hauffenn! O homem do qual eu sou completamente apaixonada? O que ele diria se ele soubesse que Raquel Santos era uma mulher manchada pela violência sexual?

DaoistAgsOV4 · Urbano
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Life In Another Reality

I thought my life was full of twists, but the biggest shock came after I died. Here I was, staring at a 17 years old guy in the mirror. Just your regular brown eyes, short black hair, and a good-looking face. Maybe I looked better in my past life, who knows? It's strange to wrap my head around the fact that I'm now this teenager after all the twists and struggles in my old life. Well, what can I do other than live it again? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- P.S. - This is my trial novel since I'm not that experienced with stories. I'll try to update it daily or every 2 days, just doing it for fun or to try something new. So, please be a little lenient on me with reviews.

I_am_good_today · Outros
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The Revenant of Old Eldoria

In the annals of time, a virtuous soul once graced the earth—a noble knight whose allegiance to king and gods defined him. The world basked in the warmth of his kindness, yet his foes trembled before the fierceness of his might. With a blade that bathed the kingdom in the blood of adversaries, he, with hands calloused from toil, nourished the destitute. A solitary figure, he shunned family for unwavering loyalty to king and gods. As he departed this realm, a profound void echoed through the land, for no better man had walked its soil. Even the gods, in their divine halls, acknowledged the rare brilliance he embodied. Five million years hence, a spectral presence returned—a haunting metamorphosis of the once-mortal man. Gone was the benevolent soul, replaced by a ghostly visage, wielding the sword of divine judgment. The wrath and fury of ancient gods flowed through him, a revenant, a phantom of old Eldoria. In this spectral rebirth, the very essence of his being stirred the echoes of souls across time, whispering of a once noble spirit now entwined with the divine forces that shaped his destiny.

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Trapped in an Isekai with my best friend

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DearilBlack · Fantasia
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The Uneventful Life of Villager Z

In the world of Aetia, titles meant everything. From your bloodline down to your achievements, they dictate your value in the world. But a few decades ago, the world was suddenly enveloped with light and words began to float above everyone's heads. For many years, they tried to decipher what this phenomenon meant. Suddenly, a revelation came from the prophets of each church from all over Aetia saying that these formed words were gifts from the gods which dictated the 'predetermined destiny' of the gods bestowed on the holder. With that knowledge, in just the span of a few years, the whole of Aetia turned upside down. Nobles suddenly weren't nobles anymore. Commoners now held titles of Kings and Queens. Titles like 'Hero' and 'Heroine' emerged. 'Villain' and 'Demon King' had eventually followed suit. With these titles along with the gods' revelation, people set out to make their destinies come true and soon became the main characters of their own stories. But if you're here expecting to get to know another 'hero' or 'villain' then better close this book and find some other story. There are so many books about those heroes in this world that your eyes would rot if you even attempted to read even a quarter of their number. That's right, there's no hero in this book. This story is about me and me alone. The one and only villager Z. ∆ If anyone other than Villager Z is reading this, please respect the privacy of the owner and submit this book without opening it to the Lost & Found Section by the nearest stall of the Adstral Guild. Or if you are near Kiroth Town, please drop it off in front of the white door of the last house down the central road. ∆

So_mi · Fantasia
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Savage Dreamz

"Hey, short stack." Tao leaned on the wall with his hands I his pockets. "Are you calling me?" With her height, Mimi Ann had never been called 'short'. "Who else is short here?" She looked around and surely she was the shortest person around the basketball team. "Why are you calling me that though?" The young man shrugged, "Because you're vertically challenged?" "I'm one hundred and seventy seven centimetres tall! I am actually considered a tall human being." Tao smirked arrogantly then walked to her and bend his back so that He looked at her face, "Little freezer, this is the basketball court not a studio. Go sing somewhere else." She gritted her teeth and stomped out muttering, "Little Freezer? What's with his nicknames?" Tao liked teasing her and seeing her angry face. He laughed, "Because you're a little duckling, I have to bend down to talk to you... Like I do when I want to take something from the freezer." he chuckled and watching her stomp out even angrier. After her mother's death Mimi Ann, a beautiful seventeen year old girl, meets the father she has never met before and had hated all her life for that reason. She has half siblings and schoolmates who look down on her as an illegitimate child. Worst of all, she has never met these people but has to move from Zimbabwe to China right after her mother's burial. At her new school she finds her solution in a co-ed wannabe unpopular band that is known as the school outcasts. She joins them to compete with her half sister to get on her father's nerves with the hopes of being chased back to the home she grew up in and was comfortable. While she is at it she falls for one of the popular boys at school, Zi Tao, a basketball top star and life just turns hectic. Looking at the three people in the room for the first time Mimi Ann smirked, "So this is where the school outcasts hang?" A beautiful young woman with white hair frowned, "Some may call us that but we are a legit band." "What do you call yourselves?" "BARD." answered one of the two boys. Mimi Ann frowned, "What's that? What does that mean?" "We took the B from BTS or BTOB, they are very popular Korean bands and the ARD is from KARD a popuar Co-ed group just like us." Mimi Ann choked on her own spit, "What? Does your band live off other bands? No wonder you are deemed the school outcasts but I'm here now to change everything, starting with your copycat nature." the girl smiled confidently. Follow Mimi Ann's journey into her new life as she tries to fit into a new family, country and school.

Milicent_Chimunda · Adolescente
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Firstly the synopsis is very eye catching. Writing quality is is nice. Updates are quite frequent. The story is very interesting and attractive. The world background is well designed. And the characters are also very nicely designed and defined. The Author has done a nice job....👌 Keep up the good work! I will be following the story....

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At the time of writing, only 3 chapters were up. Thus, it was only based on the events prior to the 'trapped in time' aspect as stated in the synopsis. Overall, it has promise. There's not much that can be said about the plot itself due to the more 'exciting parts' have yet to be touched upon. Writing Quality: Great. As English isn't my first language, any grammar mistakes (if any) was not noticed by me. The writing is smooth, the description clear and realistic. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: high potential. The build-up is good, indicating that the future chapters will be good as well. Character Design & World Background: Well written and realistic. Since it is 'modern earth', not much can be said about the 'creativity of world background'. However, it was depicted well and that's good enough for me. Overall, an enjoyable read. For those who would like mystery and intrigue, I believe this is for you.

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Hello everyone, I have started writing again. Since I started working it became practically impossible for me to post chapters, as I was getting home around 8 p.m. daily and was not in a position to do anything. Now, I am free again and have picked up the threads of the story and wish to finish the story it within 2-3 months. Chapter 147 posted just now shows the Earthlings meeting the members of the Administrative Council on the Mother Ship as it heads to Titan.

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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow? XXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP

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Hello everyone. Sorry, I have been away so long. This is to inform you all my readers that I have started volume II of this novel. One chapter has already been posted. Chapter 133.

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I can feel a mystery vibes out here!😂 World background was beautifully written. (The whole botany thingy made me feel I came back to my college life haha) Introducing the characters were quite unusual. (Usually, the past of a character was introduced one by one. But, this seems thier past will be introduced in one go.) Writing was finely done. Not too deep means that a lot of readers will be able to understand it. (Just few missing quotation marks) (I'm not sure about this, but as far as I know, using Sir/Ma'am before a name was common thing, like Ma'am Zia or Sir Luke. Zia ma'am was unusual to me.) Keep writing!👍 P.S. Love that girls' instinct.. deducing that Luke likes Zia and something ❤️❤️ will happen after the camp.. haha her students were truly amazing.

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Overall the story quite good, however there are quite a few errors and inconsistencies in the story, I like the botany PhD since it isn’t a cliche, the students were introduced all together but I feel like it would’ve been better to individually introduce them as the story goes on so the reader doesn’t have a sudden influx of information

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