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"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them." (Walt Disney)
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I really appreciate the effort the author went into to give accurate information, which definitely shows the amount of dedication that went into the novel! The whole concept of the story is also very interesting and original, so that draws the reader in. However, the writing would sometimes get a little dense with all of the information, and I would recommend interspersing giving background with current actions, thoughts, and dialogue of the characters, as that makes it more engaging. Great work overall!
Haha yep when you tun out of things to name a restaurant!
Lmao yepp that’s the intent c;
Hm... c;
Aww...
AhahA 😂
Lol nice detail of piano tiles!
Haha totally agree!