At the time of writing, only 3 chapters were up. Thus, it was only based on the events prior to the 'trapped in time' aspect as stated in the synopsis. Overall, it has promise. There's not much that can be said about the plot itself due to the more 'exciting parts' have yet to be touched upon. Writing Quality: Great. As English isn't my first language, any grammar mistakes (if any) was not noticed by me. The writing is smooth, the description clear and realistic. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: high potential. The build-up is good, indicating that the future chapters will be good as well. Character Design & World Background: Well written and realistic. Since it is 'modern earth', not much can be said about the 'creativity of world background'. However, it was depicted well and that's good enough for me. Overall, an enjoyable read. For those who would like mystery and intrigue, I believe this is for you.

Firstly the synopsis is very eye catching. Writing quality is is nice. Updates are quite frequent. The story is very interesting and attractive. The world background is well designed. And the characters are also very nicely designed and defined. The Author has done a nice job....👌 Keep up the good work! I will be following the story....

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The novel seems to be an amazing story, with a promise of mystery later on. It is educative also and I am sure children will like to read it too.

Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.

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The author's prose is quite simple but attractive, the sentences flowing smoothly. There are only a couple of minor errors that will not alienate readers from their reading flow. The author also does a good job when mixing paragraphs of the characters with informative segments. As for the rate of updates, it looks pretty constant so far. The story progresses slowly but surely at the moment. Just past half of the chapters published so far (and especially two thirds into it) the main conflict begins to unravel, as the story focused initially on introducing multiple characters throughout each chapter. Perhaps the author could have allowed herself to leave certain segments of his characters for later, or perhaps she could have intermixed them more with the plot itself so that it would have progressed more effectively. As for the characters, I have to give credit to the author. Considering that she had to focus on so many at the same time, they are all quite well-fleshed-out, written and portrayed convincingly so that readers can connect to them properly. The fictional universe, perhaps, is the greatest strength in this story. The plot remains within realistic margins for much of its stretch (I read that the author had to change from "realistic" to "science" fiction, and I certainly understand the reason). A lot of what I've read so far is focused on a group of students camping, and the author certainly knows how to make you feel part of that experience, from minor details to the exploration of nature itself. In general terms, this is a rather compelling slow-paced and character-driven story for nature lovers and readers looking for more grounded, adventure-themed sci-fi stories.

There was no other way of posting this. I need to inform my readers that I had to change the genre of my novel from Realistic Fiction to Science Fiction. In Realistic Fiction you need to hover around reality like you write about a cancer patient and how he combats his health issues arising due to chemotherapy etc. This is close to reality. You cannot deviate to extremely imaginative situations. Realistic Fiction for did not give me much scope for my novel. Earlier, I could not change the genre but I finally managed to do so from Realistic Fiction to Science Fiction with the help of the mobile app. Now, I can write about many things which may not be possible now but may be possible in the future. If matter is truth, I do mention in the creator's notes.

The story is getting exciting! There are lots of amazing information most people do not come across with. And as a nature lover myself, the plots makes just make me excited for the next!