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Eldritch Bleak

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Read ‘Eldritch Bleak’ Online for Free, written by the author Eldritch_Umbra, This book is a Horror&Thriller Novel, covering ACTION Fiction, ADVENTURE Light Novel, COMEDY Internet Novel, and the synopsis is: Monsters are real. Felix didn't believe, but after a fateful encounter in the frozen mountains of Oregon that cost him m...

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Monsters are real. Felix didn't believe, but after a fateful encounter in the frozen mountains of Oregon that cost him more than just his ignorance, Felix has no choice but to believe in the sinister, unseen world that could swallow him in an instant.

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Niloy_16
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Good starting. I can feel your writing style is more professional than mine. I like how you have described every single thing. I could picturise everything while I'm reading. Your work gets me hooked up. Waiting to read more chapters. Make soon to give more chapters author!! ;)

TheLOSTONE
TheLOSTONELv2TheLOSTONE

Bro, you are torturing us with 11 chapters; please give us more!! It's such an excellent book the story is going so well. I am looking to how you would unfold it all.

Red_Venerable
Red_VenerableLv11Red_Venerable

Great begining, I hope you will keep this up. It's refreshing to see a well made horror novel in webnovels. The character's and their emotional stability is well shown, every chapter intrigues the reader. 10/10 or should I say 5/5

glass_explosions
glass_explosionsLv1glass_explosions

It is an absolute crime to leave me hanging on just 4 chapters!! The author's writing style made me completely hooked, and I was fully immersed into the story. Myra and Felix's interactions were really cute, and the way the monster was described was mind blowing. The way the author described scenes in the book was beautiful and full of amazing imagery... Eldritch Bleak is definitely a hidden gem. I will be banned from Webnovel because of this book for spamming the author to give me more chapters. [img=update][img=update] Seriously. This is a work of art. I hope you keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Joyon
JoyonLv2Joyon

The beginning is pretty good,very well written novel. Has a great pacing, the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Please Keep it up.

Joker_7
Joker_7Lv2Joker_7

The novel has a great start, I believe that it can grow a lot more. Keep up the good work and Don't stop writing! I believe that the imagery is quite good and it can still be better

SirSyko
SirSykoLv1SirSyko

Interesting start, I like the writing style. The style fits the theme really well, and the tone is perfect. I hope he becomes a writing machine and makes 100 more lol.

Arathes
ArathesLv12Arathes

The author is incredible with his words and descriptions, the world is fleshed out so vividly and character interactions from seen this far are very good, can not find any errors or places for constructive criticism

Ghostorie
GhostorieLv1Ghostorie

I enjoyed the way you narrated your story and described your main character, giving us enough information to keep reading onto the second chapter.

Killershellfish
KillershellfishLv15Killershellfish

The writing quality is on point. Definitely better than mine. I enjoyed the description of a rundown cozy cabin in the woods. I will be sticking around to see where this story goes. Keep up the great work author.

goodeygoody
goodeygoodyLv3goodeygoody

The way that you've already wrapped me into the story after just two chapters dumbfounds me. The characters, although few, are interesting and funny, making witty remarks toward each other that bring a smile to my face. You've done good building the story to this after only 2 chapters, and I would like to see how this furthers itself.

LordEggar
LordEggarLv1LordEggar

Absolutely fell in love with the first chapter. It's a great hook and your writing style is quite beautiful. The progression through both chapters was quite nice, though I think I'd liked to have one or two chapters between the first chapter and the next sighting of the monster, mainly because I wanted to get to know the main characters a bit more first. I also think, though the description is beautiful, it might work better if you broke up your paragraphs up a bit more. This is mainly because it can be a bit of an effort to read in succession. Otherwise I've got no real gripe or criticism, I'm really excited to read more.

Peacejacob
PeacejacobLv13Peacejacob

How do you write so well, the quality stands out and it's an interesting read from the start. I recommend this work to everyone, believe it when I say you'll love it.

Black_Lotus99
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I genuinely love the first two chapters, plus you have a great writing sense. Keep it up; I can't wait for more chapters. [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

Naveen_Kumar_5132
Naveen_Kumar_5132Lv1Naveen_Kumar_5132

Nice work . Just try to make the words easy to understand . Over all it was a good work . The chapter just started try to keep up a work . All the best .

Flowerbird
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Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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