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Joyon

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  • Joyon
    Joyon1d
    Replied to libio

    Reborn sounds better than replaced. The MC is always there. He is just using the alter-ego for now. He will return to his original when this story line with the alter-ego completes and may have another alter-ego. Face changing is a main theme of this story. Thanks for reading and comment

    I am in effect reborn as the young master of the Kaleon family of Staari city.
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  • Joyon
    Joyon4d
    Replied to aniket_keer

    five or six

    Ratatouille was another of my Golem friends and also one of the Anti-Saints, Greed. 
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  • Joyon
    Joyon5d
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    Some readers find the use of first person description confusing. I can understand that because the MC is transformed into another person, Oriese. Where "I" is used in the novel, it always refers to the MC although he may be using different alter-egos. Occasionally, "I" is not used by the MC in situations where he disguised as another but the story will slowly reveal that and once revealed, the MC will return to the first person description. Sorry that this writing style will confuse readers. I apologize if you do but that is the way I know how to bring out the story in an exciting way. Thanks for reading.

    Ch 1 RIDING ON A TITAN
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  • Joyon
    Joyon5d
    Commented

    Some readers find the use of first person description confusing. I can understand that because the MC is transformed into another person, Oriese. Where "I" is used in the novel, it always refers to the MC although he may be using different alter-egos. Occasionally, "I" is not used by the MC in situations where he disguised as another but the story will slowly reveal that and once revealed, the MC will return to the first person description. Sorry that this writing style will confuse readers. I apologize if you do but that is the way I know how to bring out the story in an exciting way. Thanks for reading.

    Ch 1 A DRAGON, AT THE END OF SPACE
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  • Joyon
    Joyon6d
    Commented

    Some readers find the use of first person description confusing. I can understand that because the MC is transformed into another person, Oriese. Where "I" is used in the novel, it always refers to the MC although he may be using different alter-egos. Occasionally, "I" is not used by the MC in situations where he disguised as another but the story will slowly reveal that and once revealed, the MC will return to the first person description. Sorry that this writing style will confuse readers. I apologize if you do but that is the way I know how to bring out the story in an exciting way. Thanks for reading.

    Ch 1 REBORN AS A SCHOOL BULLY
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  • Joyon
    Joyon13d
    Replied to RyuSenju

    sorry to get you confused. 'I' is used for the MC throughout the book except when he is using an alter-ego or an incarnate. In those situation, I use the MC's name instead of 'I' as a hint that the person is an alter-ego or incarnate. Sorry if that confused you some more :(

    Ch 94 BRINGING DOWN A MAJOR SECT WITH FAKE NEWS
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  • Joyon
    Joyon13d
    Replied to RyuSenju

    Now we have a harem, what do you guys want them to do? Some readers wasn't happy with a fade to black description. What do you guys think, soon there will be the MC consummation with his harem?

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  • Joyon
    Joyon17d
    Replied to RyuSenju

    Hi, thanks for asking. Currently there will be 5. Would people here tell me whether I should have more for the MC? Or less

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  • Joyon
    Joyon30d
    Replied to Sonu_Siraj_5546

    harem

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  • Joyon
    Joyon1mth
    Replied to Joyon

    Hi, I do not plan to lock this book so it will be free to read. If you wish to reward my writing with gifts, I would be very pleased but that is not necessary. The important thing is for you to enjoy my book and let me know that you do. Thanks

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  • Joyon
    Joyon1mth
    Posted

    Dear Readers, Thank you for reading and subscribing to my book. This book is the third part of my series @end of the world. The book can be read on its own but I encourage you to read the previous books (Which have been revised) if you have time. I thank all the readers who had given me good suggestions and comments and I've incorporated most of them into the rewrite of my previous two books and into my new book. If you have any comments or suggestions on how you like the story to evolve, please feel free to comment here or in the Chapter comments. Thanks for Reading.

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  • Joyon
    Joyon1mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 REBORN AS A SCHOOL BULLY
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  • Joyon
    Joyon2mth
    Replied to DeathOfDeath

    Thanks for your comment. That is a prequel to the MC reborn but he wont lose everything from the previous life. He will recover them eventually.

    Ch 1 A DRAGON, AT THE END OF SPACE
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  • Joyon
    Joyon3mth
    Posted

    Thank you everyone for your patience, this book is reviewed and completed. This is the second book in my story Revelations@end of the world. The third book, Conjurer@end of the world, will continue being uploaded here in the second book(For algo purposes) The third book will be released as a separate book soon, also free to read. Both the first and third book are free to read. They can be read independently from the other books if you wish. I've put in information and backstory to explain the missing plots from the previous book.

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  • Joyon
    Joyon6mth
    Replied to CHAOS_FOOLISH

    Yes he likes girls

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  • Joyon
    Joyon6mth
    Replied to BookWorms007

    Thanks for the comment and review. Will keep your pointers in mind when I revise the book again. Thanks again for comment.

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  • Joyon
    Joyon7mth
    Replied to Wilder6

    It has modern tech in a fantasy setting. the mc builds his magical park becoming a powerful force in the city, is that considered kingdom building? Thanks for reading and comment

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  • Joyon
    Joyon7mth
    Replied to Mrblack98

    He will attend Magic School soon but the way he uses magic will be different from most. Thanks for comment

    Ch 13 THE MAGE'S GUILD ALCHEMIST LABORATORY
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  • Joyon
    Joyon7mth
    Replied to Tommyshelby

    interesting idea, I'll see if I can incorporate into story.

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  • Joyon
    Joyon7mth
    Replied to Tommyshelby

    three ghosts are revealed as of now. I'm still writing the story so there may be more. Antoinette is not a waifu for him, more like an aunt or supporter but there may be a plot about a ghost waifu

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