Black_Lotus99

Thank you so much for the review. I will post more chapters, but the holidays have me busy with family since it's the only time I spend with them because I am in med school, and it gets very hectic there! Thank you for giving my story a chance; I appreciate all the comments; I will soon reply to them like I always do.

I had created that plot hole just for this moment. My mc does not have a goal, at least a long-term one; we will explore it together as he goes on this journey.

I hope so too!

Find out on the next episode of Dragon Ball Z, uhm, I mean One Man, One Spear!

Glad you liked it ^^

First!

First!

They were really good, I am sure to get good grades, thanks for asking!

But I agree with your review from a reader's view; thank you for reading my book nonetheless and giving this excellent review. I will try my best to improve my writing!

I will be addressing this as I write. I am not a very good writer, and my grammar is not as good as others, but I will do my best. Many of the plot holes you mention were there because I wanted them to be, and I will also be pinning your comment. It would serve as a good reminder for me. Thank you!