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Men

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everytime i hear satella, Nutella come up in my mind.maybe i am just dumb

I don't know whether you will continue this some day but I hope so. I rly enjoyed it this is one of my favourite novel. so Author if u ever see this message pls continue. I will wait

Man its sad that you stopped writing this. i hope on day you will Continue

finally rear admiral and not real admiral

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Really thank your for your comment. I notice long ago that I am too fast. I myself like fast paced, but I think I am just writing to fast. I will try to make the strory more interesting. And thank you for the comment with Roy. I will talk about that in the new chapter.

Yes I know that I made him too op, but that is because the Index are op as well. And the with being an Admiral. To that I have already said, that I know, that it is too fast. The story with Luffy, ace and Sabo I didn't tell because nothing new happened and I didn't know why I should write that arc, if it like in the anime and Manga, but only that Blake is there. But I want to thank you for the criticism you gave me! I don't know I anyone understands my bad writing here. Hahaha

Sure. I will try to be a bit slower

No problem, brother

I just think that Roy needs to explain everything. Because It just doesn't make sense if someone Reincarnates without a good reason. And I tried to make a reason.Haha

Yeah, that chapter was under 400 words.

Thank you for your support