Review Detail of Jade_beauty in Legendary martial artist in one piece (completed)

Item: Legendary martial artist in one piece (completed)
Rating: 3

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Jade_beautyLv41yrJade_beauty

It's ok, it is something to read while bored, but it is not something that I would prefer to read over other fanfics. Things progress very quickly, too quickly in my opinion.

Legendary martial artist in one piece (completed)

Syrus_

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Syrus_AuthorSyrus_

Really thank your for your comment. I notice long ago that I am too fast. I myself like fast paced, but I think I am just writing to fast. I will try to make the strory more interesting. And thank you for the comment with Roy. I will talk about that in the new chapter.

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