Review Detail of Nightrow in Legendary martial artist in one piece (completed)
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Absolute ridiculous. Wanna read something an author gets bored in the second chapter? Go on. Author himself got so bored he just overpowered the MC as the strongest in the world, as a child. When a 12 year old child joined the marine he became immediately an admiral. And frankly, there's nothing really written but what I told you. Despite being born as Luffy's brother, he had no interaction whatsoever, we don't know his personality, goals, how he talks. This fic is so trashy, I really wish I hadn't wasted my time.
Legendary martial artist in one piece (completed)
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Yes I know that I made him too op, but that is because the Index are op as well. And the with being an Admiral. To that I have already said, that I know, that it is too fast. The story with Luffy, ace and Sabo I didn't tell because nothing new happened and I didn't know why I should write that arc, if it like in the anime and Manga, but only that Blake is there. But I want to thank you for the criticism you gave me! I don't know I anyone understands my bad writing here. Hahaha
But making him an admiral is too much, being too young and lacking experience is one of the many reasons. U could make him soar through the ranks instead of making him and admiral right off the bat.
Syrus_:Yes I know that I made him too op, but that is because the Index are op as well. And the with being an Admiral. To that I have already said, that I know, that it is too fast. The story with Luffy, ace and Sabo I didn't tell because nothing new happened and I didn't know why I should write that arc, if it like in the anime and Manga, but only that Blake is there. But I want to thank you for the criticism you gave me! I don't know I anyone understands my bad writing here. Hahahaimage