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5/writing quality is great for the standerds of this site 3/ idk stability of updates 4/ good story development so far 4/ all characters are bearable and somewhat reasonable so far 5/ world background is somewhat unique and good Good book but the author is absolute TRASH at titles like why not name it "Obelisk" or "The Great Monolith" instead of a cheesy title, quite literally describing the main character. Also never put the word system in ur titles it sounds lazy and of poor quality.

Grammar and spelling is very good Idk why the author feels the need to reiterate that Nero is beautiful constantly and describe random peoples thoughts/reactions to how she looks. you should just describe other characters thoughts about the main character when they are important and/or introducing them.

Shit, it is very shit :) It is almost like you should not let your political beliefs influence a fantasy book :) China has mass censorship so i guess this is the bootlicking that it causes

Grammar is good I just hate the MC he is childish (understandable since he is one) and he is very naive. also he just hates humans and loves monsters, i get the author said that it will be explained later but it seems like it is something that is relevant to early events in the book and needs to be explained early on. Honestly i have a hard time sitting through the book.

Grammar and spelling is good Author is on some Joker "We Live in a Society" drugs while writing this Chapters are too short Overall good book

By Chapter 6: Grammar and spelling is good Why do i not know much at all about the world and main characters by ch 6 all i know is that these people carry around swords, get freelanced to do jobs and some sort of magic exists. You need to establish your world quicker.

At first i was afraid of reading due to the reviews saying the grammar is bad and i was extra sad seeing a grammar mistake on the first line of the book and yes there is mistakes but most are unnoticeable and it is not frustrating at all to read. Overall good book, world looks like it has thought put into it. I thought Brian/Fatty was going to be dead weight and annoying/comedic relief at first just due to common tropes but he is not, there was not reason to make him fat.

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i totally agree and i want more people to see this comment in the sea of bot comments giving 5 stars

Good book, likeable characters slows down wayyyyyyy to much at the shizuka/minor mind fix arc. my stars where /4 /4 /2 /5 /5 hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh