i'll give my honest review. The starting of the story was quite intriguing and interesting. From the start, you feel as if you're getting drawn into the plot. It's truly enchanting. The characters are well designed and the world background is vivid and realistic. The only issue I have with is how the dialogue is written. Also, there were few grammatical mistakes here and there. But other than that, I do not have any problems. The author is doing an amazing job and I can hardly wait for the upcoming chapters to come. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!
I can't believe this book does not have enough reviews when it should ranking like all those other novels. Man... what a start. I could only read the first few chapters yet I'm hooked on this story. the world background and the characterization is simply amazing. I must say that author's writing style incredible. It is so well written. I'm going to read all the chapters once I have time because honestly, I can't get enough of it. I'm looking forward to how it will progress in the future. Thank you for your hard work authornim~
from the start of the story, I must say that this book got me hooked. The premise, the world background, the characterization, everything about this book is intriguing and exciting. The author's writing style is simply amazing. The descriptions and the situations are so vivid that I could clearly see them happening in front of me. It's sad that the story hasn't been updated recently cause I'm honestly looking for more. Please update soon. Thank you for your hard work!
Oh, My God! What an interesting start! I don't usually read first pov stories but god this got me hooked like?? From the start, it has an eerie feeling but not enough to scare you away. I like the suspense and the pace of this story. The world back is amazing. The author's writing style is just a chef's kiss. I'm honestly excited about how this story will flow in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
the starting of this story is quite intriguing. It's still too early to say where it will flow in the future but the premise and the world background are interesting as hell. I must say that the author's writing style is unique. I don't tend to read first pov stories much but this is simply amazing. I'm definitely excited to see where it will head in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
The starting of the story got me hooked. I must say that after the first chapter I just could not stop reading this story. The detailed descriptions, the character building, and the world background were simply amazing. The author has a good grip over the words which makes it pleasing too. I'm really interested in how this story flourishes in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
Thank you so much for your kind words! it really means a lot to me. Please look forward to the upcoming chapters. I hope you have a great day!
The starting of the story was quite shocking but in a good way. The author's writing style is good and easy on the eyes. I liked the descriptions of the scenes. The character design is good and the story flow is amazing. I'm eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. Thank you for your hard work!
I love, love, love the fact that the author decided to add our Indian history to this novel. It is always exciting and intriguing to see our culture. And I'm really happy with the fact that the author decided to research and include correct facts rather than winging it. As far as the storyline, I must say that it is unique and interesting. As for the writing, maybe the author should proofread it before uploading as there are quite a few mistakes here and there but nothing too serious. but apart from that, the flow of the story is good and I'm really hooked. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!!!
I really don't read a lot of fantasy novels but I must say, I'm simply amazed. The author's imagination is out of this world. The writing style felt a little bit confusing at first, but after going through it again, it became clear. But seriously, the concept of the novel is extraordinary. I'm hooked. Please update the next chapters soon. Thank you for your hard work!