Review Detail of Xylesia in Fatal

i'll give my honest review. The starting of the story was quite intriguing and interesting. From the start, you feel as if you're getting drawn into the plot. It's truly enchanting. The characters are well designed and the world background is vivid and realistic. The only issue I have with is how the dialogue is written. Also, there were few grammatical mistakes here and there. But other than that, I do not have any problems. The author is doing an amazing job and I can hardly wait for the upcoming chapters to come. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!