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i'll give my honest review. The starting of the story was quite intriguing and interesting. From the start, you feel as if you're getting drawn into the plot. It's truly enchanting. The characters are well designed and the world background is vivid and realistic. The only issue I have with is how the dialogue is written. Also, there were few grammatical mistakes here and there. But other than that, I do not have any problems. The author is doing an amazing job and I can hardly wait for the upcoming chapters to come. I hope the author will update soon. Thank you for your hard work!
I can't believe this book does not have enough reviews when it should ranking like all those other novels. Man... what a start. I could only read the first few chapters yet I'm hooked on this story. the world background and the characterization is simply amazing. I must say that author's writing style incredible. It is so well written. I'm going to read all the chapters once I have time because honestly, I can't get enough of it. I'm looking forward to how it will progress in the future. Thank you for your hard work authornim~
from the start of the story, I must say that this book got me hooked. The premise, the world background, the characterization, everything about this book is intriguing and exciting. The author's writing style is simply amazing. The descriptions and the situations are so vivid that I could clearly see them happening in front of me. It's sad that the story hasn't been updated recently cause I'm honestly looking for more. Please update soon. Thank you for your hard work!
Oh, My God! What an interesting start! I don't usually read first pov stories but god this got me hooked like?? From the start, it has an eerie feeling but not enough to scare you away. I like the suspense and the pace of this story. The world back is amazing. The author's writing style is just a chef's kiss. I'm honestly excited about how this story will flow in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
the starting of this story is quite intriguing. It's still too early to say where it will flow in the future but the premise and the world background are interesting as hell. I must say that the author's writing style is unique. I don't tend to read first pov stories much but this is simply amazing. I'm definitely excited to see where it will head in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
The starting of the story got me hooked. I must say that after the first chapter I just could not stop reading this story. The detailed descriptions, the character building, and the world background were simply amazing. The author has a good grip over the words which makes it pleasing too. I'm really interested in how this story flourishes in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!